The story is a mess.Rather than having the mc become a low level master black smith and show his importance it broke world building in order in order to show off Chinese weapons.Let me explain:From where I currently left the mc is already 7th grade in terms of power as a martial artist yet still hasn't advanced to low level master blacksmith yet.And oh by the way he became important to the kingdom. An apprentice blacksmith is a slave because mortal weapons are not really useful but for the sake of power fantasy the author made it so that mortal weapons have great importance. The author also made blacksmiths above apprentice almost nonexistent just so the mc has importance, only grandmasters have appeared. In fact the higher weapons are very very rare for some reason.When assassin went to the kingdom to assassinate a high target or targets none of them had a single weapon above mortal. Like excuse me? This isn't the end of the dumbness. For some reason the enemy kingdom just so happen to make a list of all the assassins that are going to kill the targets. Killing these targets would hurt the Xia kingdom. So why would they make a note like that? And why would they entrust that note on some low level martial artists? One of those targets have a very high rank so why? To hide it? Then why would those low ranks have a band of soldiers behind them? Because of that they were discovered. Why? So the mc could do something important even if he is weak. Why would mortal weapons not break or be inefficient against martial artist? So the mc can be important.More importantly so Chinese weapons can be praised. That's right all this world breaking is so the author can praise weapons. At least that is what I think otherwise why would the author do this?
Translation quality: terrible. The translation quality up to chapter 40 is good, but after that it’s like a switch was flipped and now it’s closer to poorly edited MTL. At this point, the translation is so literal that it’s difficult to follow. 2/5Updating stability: solid. Even though the updates are bad, at least they’re regular. That said, they immediately released 25 chapters into their privilege tier so it could obviously be better. 4/5Story development: mixed. The cases are interesting, but outside of them the story is too bland. Everything goes right for the MC and he’s never challenged or in conflict with anything else. And while it doesn’t particularly bother me, the “China STRONK” nationalism is particularly fierce in this one. 3/5Character design: lackluster. While the criminals are interesting and there’s some gray to the morality, the characters we spend the most time with are bland and uninteresting. The romance is the same: bland. It’s also rushed and the characters involved are too perfect. 2/5World background: uninspired. Normally, I find the nationalism inherent in Chinese novels intriguing, because their take on foreign countries as filtered through the state media and Great Firewall gives a unique perspective on the author’s culture, but here it actually hurts them. The MC transmigrated to a world where nothing is different, except that China is as powerful there as the US is in reality. Other than that, there is no difference from the day-to-day that we already live with so the worldbuilding is something the author just skipped. 2/5Overall: I’m dropping this at chapter 90-something because of the tl quality more than anything else. While the cases are indeed interesting, there’s just not enough there to justify straining to read the terrible translation.
Yay Ihis novel didn't have romance which is making me interesting in this novel. I liked comedy novel and game system. This summary sound interested. Looking forward to read this novel.
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Zhanye was a Brazilian youtuber who ended up suffering from exposed pedophilia, where he had nudes from a 13-year-old girl, who exchanged sexual photos, lost the youtube channel and is now making soap operas, please ban this guy, he's a damn pedo
Uncle Kim is not happy, I'll nuke you allThis is a good novel ahMC is a Chinese dude, stay in America rent a room, his landlord hannah fox, is a super hot babe like megan fox (just kidding) He have an amber with strange insect inside, one day the amber fall an cracking, the insect craw out and bor to MC palm, then boom long story short MC can control this insect and foresight Hunting coins, money under vending machine, and any other treasures anywhere. Yup this novel not about transmigration, or reincarnation, it is modern life. You fcker being lazy and didn't even doing research before voting. Uncle Kim really mad right now
im gonna Read It Later Nice Fist Chapter ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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not bad, I like itThis is Good Compare to other ff that I have read similarly to this.
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Interesting story, update soon Pls.
An intriguing book with interesting characters in it. I can’t wait to read more.