reviewing for the event fp. keep up the good work.
Hi here for free fps ! I think the story is good
Enjoyed the journey!
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Starts out ok but quickly goes downhill. The original starting point is clear and conflict is well defined. However that is quickly abandoned for empty reasons. Some other reviewers say that the mc isn’t op must be of the opinion that only god is op. He has to go to a four year school yet got to the top of everything surpassing the fourth year students in half a year, I think. The author has a problem keeping track or at least mentioning how long it is between scenes. There were several times where it sounded like it was days or weeks only to mention that the mid year tests were right around the corner. Then he gets involved with the military of an allied nation and becomes the cornerstone of a 250+ unit in a couple of weeks, again I think because of the author’s inconsistent timeline, boosting the power of a fringe unit to an elite one within that time. All of the “relationships”, which seem to be a main point of the story, ring hollow as there is a clear declaration from more than a few that it’s all because of his ability to boost others but it’s kind of needed since the mc is very hollow himself.All in all this seems to be trying to be a few things but just ends up being not that good at any of them.
Story is ok and some times, the plot armor comes into action. Well I dont like his wasting time on kingdom building.Relationships work in normal phase.He has like 3 girls in 300 chaps. And yes ALL DUMB ANIMAL RIGHTS ACTIVIST SHOULD STAY AWAY FROM NOVELS!!!
Volume 1 Review!It tails the story of Elias Gobarau when he was transported to another world that was filled with Fog and his mode of transportation was driving islands.There are 5 arcs in this volume.First Trial ArcSecond Trial ArcThird Trial ArcFourth Trial Arc Lolwah Arc andDark TrialThis was the trial Elias had undergone except Lolwah Arc. Each trial was unique with missions and hardship. He also obtains a reward that will help him adjust to the Mysterious World.In the next Volume, Elias has finished his trial and reaches the first human community!
Wow....by just reading the sypnosis I can tell this story is sad. Well, the cover says so. But despite that, I love the storyline most importantly how it is beautifully written. I can feel every scene. I recommend this! You have to see what's inside because you'll found a gem!
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This novel is very poetic. The wording is so smooth and intricate, this writer clearly takes great pride in her use of literary devices. Tremendous work author, I'm looking forward to more updates ?
This story is very interesting and unlike anything that I ever seen I like it and I love the character development in the story and I would love for there to be more reads like this and i would love I there were more chapters of this read
The storyline is unique and good, but the imprecise and lengthy writing sometimes leaves readers confused. The character portrayal is not in-depth enough, but chapter 1 is interesting to read and needs improvement in the writing. Keep up the good work author!