Good book. I especially like author notes at the end of chapters. Unfortunately there is one big problem and it's that author often use 'him' on wrong gender same with 'her', which is quite annoying.
It's interesting though. A guy gets a system that helps him do well with school, including the social aspects. Truly a unique find.
Very flat story, mc, world building, storytelling. The beginning chapters are so boring they being too short is actually good thing. It's the high rating that makes me started reading this novel, and so with high expectation this novel has become a disappointment.
The lack of details in world building made me wondered, is this the author's counter action from reading too many Chinese novels' info-dumping, or the author felt just typical generic setting is enough. On the other hand, the info about skills are very frustrating to read. There are too many skills to remember, and because the story lacks meat and bone (Actual progression, character depth), I can't endure and decide to drop.
All of these being said, I recognize and appreciate both the author's effort and his courage to publish his work. I think rewriting is required if the author wants to write a good story.
all I have to say is that this MC is literally to worst MC I have ever read about, he literally ticks off all the boxes I hate about different MCs all in one horrible package, other then that thou the novel could have a lot of potential but its impossible to read cause of the shitty MC
The story is amazing and i love it ...................
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Great read! I know writers have their own daily lives but for people who don't the release needs to be sped up... Can't drop won't drop lol
So far, there is a roller-coaster of emotions. At one point, you laugh hard but suddenly you start crying or fear crawls down you. I also enjoy the four kids. I anticipate your adventures.
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I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.
Another Evil Wuxia type novel.It is the same kind of novel where Mc will fight continously and the world background is completely ignored. Nothing new but I got the same feeling as Reverend Insanity.