Immortal Fate Of Longevity: Starting From Taking Care of Fellow

Although it is good, but MC is just plain stupid and idiot, has no common sense and still thinks that everyone is stupid. I really dislike the novels with idiot MC's

This bs is cliche as hell, plz remove this and focus on translating dozens previously ongoing translations with the same fukin plot........................................................

I am not a picky reader, I suck at English, so I am not really gonna comment on the grammar mistakes. Overall, this book has great potential the plot is great and it avoids most cliches from what I've read the character development is also good, but there is little to no dialog the you can see the character development but we never really see the developments being put into action. I truly like this book, but it's hard to read when it sounds like a documentary. I am going to drop this for now, but I'll pick this back up and hopefully see some changes in future chapters.

My 4th grade nephew once told me a story about his field trip, and it still a better story than this.                                          

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brother his novel and almost totally equal to Reincarnated as a Dragon's Egg ~ Lets Aim to Be the Strongest ~ do not know if you saw????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????