Oh god. This novel is freaking awesome.The chapters are nicely named, the prologue, even though it was an info-dump, was written so well that it didn't feel like that at all.The writing quality is superb, and I loved how everything created a sense of tension, from the first chapter.The only things I'd suggest to change are the words "A few years from now". Usually, these words aren't used for describing something that is already happening (in the story timeline, the future is the present), so perhaps change it to something like "In the year 20XX". Just a suggestion, though.Otherwise, great work!
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Incrível história e quem traduziu e escreveu.
I love that your idea is very different from the usual reads on the app. The astral projection thing is totally thrilling, and I am curious about the story's development. Please update soon.
Ive only read the first 3 chapters, and i already feel invested in the story. I writing style is very descriptive, just the way I like. Nice story mate, please keep writing.
Thanks you all for reading the book. I really appreciate. This book always create this excitement within me whenever I sit to write. I just hope you find it exciting as well.
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Good history, light and interesting.The writer is a lich then he never die and can write forever it is the best point.The main character is really great and smart, he had a sad past but now he can enjoy a new life.?
Finally! I've been waiting or this series to start back up again. The MC is ruthless and he knows it and isn't like most Chinese MC who are ruthless but rationalize that they're not. He's not a hypocrite and does what he wants like Leylin from WMW. Everyone in this series is kind o twisted so it's really amusing.Thanks for picking up this series!
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I don't like typical chinese cultivation,, but this story is rather interesting so i will let it off, but there is no character development though (everyone seems like a robot,[I specially hate that lily])