One of my favorite novels right now. The storyline is very good, I especially like the short passages written in the view of different people, sometimes unimportant ones... kinda makes everything smoother. Translation is quite good, story development and world background nice as well, character introductions sometimes not too elaborate though. Well nothing against the main character, he is a bit cold, but not without emotion, which is quite nice. Also he is not as overpowered, as some other main characters are. Just give it a try, it's definetely wort it. TRUST MEOh and pls update more often if possible!!!
Praise the lord that you have continued this story you beautiful human! Genuinely the best thing I've read on here, and that's saying a lot. Hopefully you continue to find the motivation to carry this story on because it's honestly one of a kind. I love you bro.
This story is good, however, i havent seen any reviews really criticizing anything, so ill have to do it myself.First, the author seems to enjoy wasting time rambling needlessly for chapters on end. A simple trimp from a village to the academy took like 20 chapters for no reason, it could have been handled within 5.Second, i noticed that he attempts to make the MC appear smart in the initial chapters but it just comes across as forced and makes the MC look dumber because his “smarts” are common sense lol (BUT because it was the initial chapters ima let that slide)Third, once again coming back to the authors rambling. Each action and even that take place do NOT need to be 5-10 chapters long lol, not ever event is that important and shouldnt be drawn out for the word count.Fourth, (just a pet peeve of mine) i feel that the MC is very naive for no reason. Like not in the normal sense of the word but hes very easily influenced?? If that makes sense. Like, he sees some man fly, and freaks out and starts “respecting him” (even though this dude literally met GOD 5 seconds ago) I dont know it is just weird, this kind of stuff happens a lot. (Anyways, loving the story so far author, hope you dont do anything so outrageous that i end up dropping, youd be suprised how many times that happens)
Is this remaining incomplete? At least let us know.
this mother daughter love will be the catalyst for the change in heart of our cold hearted ML
Terribly written.
I like it! Need more than one chapter to read..order
I love reading that “Mia is one of the 4 fairies in the milkway galaxy” 2-3 times every chapter. Please repeat this more often.
Need more chapters
Love, Love, Love this story by far my #1
I have been wanting to know what's been happening send the comments are helping. why didn't you make a separate book of Daniel and Ava.
Love ...️ it