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Trash novel. Just one example: the MC is at one point the top martial artist in the world, capable of killing other top martial artists with a wave, stepping in to the sky, taking sword strikes to his body without them leaving a mark, killing werewolves with a single punch, destroying entire military squadrons with missiles and helicopters in moments on his own, typical OP cultivation level powers ... then 100 chapters later he's fighting with ordinary security guards while thinking proudly that his body is strong enough to fight 6 regular people. At some point the author completely forgot that the MC has these magical OP powers and now he's just really good at fighting. Embarassing. Another example: at one point, the MC encounters a man who is road raging at him. A crowd gathers as the guy rages and threatens the MC. The MC slams into him, killing him in plain view of the gathered crowd, then causally drives away to go shopping. This incident is never mentioned again past the end of that chapter: in the next chapter we're on to jade gambling with no mention of the prior events. The MC doesn't think about it, the woman with him doesn't say anything or have any reaction, and the cops never investigate the killing. This novel is trash.
Good, I would recommend it!
The concept of the story is pretty good. However, there are many grammar and wording issues in every chapter. There is also a lack of consistency and realism. A character can't be made out to be disgusted and terrified of a dead animal and then be an experienced hunter who is used to breaking such animals down. It also doesn't make sense to be capable of dissecting and breaking down an animal with no tools whatsoever.
Writing quality 4
Story development 3
Character design 2
Updating stability- I guess it depends but I give a 3 stars.
World backround 4.
I'm not really an expert in terms of reviewing works but I'm still going to give my opinion?I guess.
Writing Quality is decent and readable, although there's some grammatical errors It was still fine. I like the writing style based 1st person perspective so I give 4 stars.
The story development for me is pretty off that's why I just gave 3 stars in this aspect. The story is very slow paced and It makes the reader feel bored. Me personally like slow pace to catch up the details and some stuffs. But slowing the progress too match will leave the bad taste to those people reading it. I highly suggest to learn how to control the pacing, Fast , Slow and etc to assure the reader is still in the story.
Character development is really not good for my opinion. At first I thought he was just a chill guy wanting peace and sort of playing video games with his friend. But after some events it was highly showed the he is the most loser , beta mc that I've ever read in my whole life. His personality is really sucks like in a bad way that it affects the readers mind. His decision is hilarious to the point I want to beat him up. I think It's okay to make him like a average person....but too much and making him like a sore loser just holding the potential of the story. At first he was bullied so he will decide to change into a new different person but still after all the things happened he just become more and more trash. He was aware the fact his friend is having *** behind his back making fool of him. I like the idea that the mc didn't care but what did he do?He played with them like a fool and it really look like stupid in my opinion. I don't want to offend the author of this story but It's been a while since I became frustated at the stupidity of a person.He can just avoid talking with that so called friends of him especially Jet, this kid is not a friend at all. He was just acting and making fun of the mc behind the back and thinking how superior he is by doing malicious things with the girls that close to him.
Ps: I'm not starting argument I'm just stating what I feel about the story so far so please go easy on me and don't take it as an personal insult. Everyone has the right to do what they want to do , right what they want and I really respect the efforts of the authors sharing their thoughts and imagination
Season 1 was so much fun for me to write, and I'd like to think I have created a good trio of main characters and an array of side characters that should spark some fun stories in the future!
Season 2 will follow the journey of our trio as they journeyed to yet a much bigger and badder superhuman city of the world! Jon will confront with his enemies old and new and the world as we know it grows every bigger!
I haven't been this excited about writing in a long time!
Here's to a fun time ahead!
Honestly, I’m Mr. Handsomest.
Saying that I’m the handsomest does not make me narcissistic! I’m only telling the truth, I’m not being narcissistic!
Overall great story. i loved it, and only problem is frequent updates. it would be great if you can daily or twice a day issue new Update. anyways i like to read this book and it’s one of my favourite readings, so please issue More update and wish you TOP RANKING !
In short this is a very good....no amazing....no the best novel I have read in a long time
It's got everything you could ever ask for. So you should read this book. Also it's got dragons which are the best mythical being there is. So what's not to like.
This novel is criminally underrated, It is truly tragic a lot of trash novels occupy the top 200 leaderboards but that's Webnovel. I enjoy everything from the macho mc to the fact that he isn't afraid to show off his own achievements.
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