The author has barely put any effort into this novel. The MC doesn’t even show the intelligence of a child. He doesn’t cover up his tracks and gets in trouble. Uses dogs as expendables in a strategy that doesn’t make any sense at all. Comes up with strategies so stupid that even plot armour fails to keep up. In conclusion, let’s bury this and never speak of it again.
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A good start to a story. It needs more chapters to be a great story. A good plot so far. I like the idea of a orc main character it is a idea that is not often used but has alot of potential to be a really good story.
(Read to chapter 54)1. It’s not exactly the flow of writing that’s a problem it’s more that clearly there’s been a lack of care in the editing and checking of grammar, spelling and punctuation making it not hard per se but irritating to read.2. The story itself seems ok but it also seems quite rushed in some areas and the writing itself doesn’t absorb the reader. There are constant coincidences and plot armout. “You know that girl you had *** with? Turns out she has a special bloodline that means she can become super strong with you so that you can carry on having *** with her and have a superficial relationship!”3. In my opinion, the mc has an unlikeable personality. He’s rash, arrogant and makes impulsive decisions. 4. The world building is pretty lackadaisical in my opinion.By the way, I’ve focused mainly on the negatives simply because they stand out more to me. It’s not terrible but it’s also not very immersive.
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