While vampire stories are not my favorite or even prefered genre, the story is quite good and very intriguing. There are some small granmar issues and the dialogue sometimes feels forced and unnatural. But its nothing granmarly cant fix. The flow of the story is really good and I can already imagine the epic adventure about to happen!
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The author's creativity and imaginative skills are at par. The writer thoughts are well projected and the plot itself is intriguing. The language too was easy and there wasn't much hassle in understanding. The background and character design was vivid. I feel the chapters are a bit shorter and the cover can be a little interesting.Overall, it's an interesting novel to read.
The story setting is really fun but it's a typical novel of this type. The MC doesn't have to put in any effort to learn to create cards, just automatically being able to 'tell' the best way to make them. And, of course, recipe's come just as naturally to him as breathing. No build-up or effort means no satisfaction from the result, which means you might as well remove the crafting part of the setting and just make it action.Character's don't act like people, and they don't interact like people. Conversations are stilted and unnatural with a lot of author self-inserts that cause the conversations to jump from one point to another. The way they communicate is really hard to stomach. It gives me second-hand embarrassment. It just makes it impossible to be engaged with the story.It's unfortunate. I love crafting stories. But this isn't a crafting story. If the author reads this, this would be a good story if you made the crafting something the MC worked towards consistently over the story's timeline and you improved the way characters interact and communicate. Those are the two points that are really dragging the story down.
Hi I like your book because it has good context and the way you right is good and it seems like you know what you are writing and I wish you carry one writing thanks.
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Terrible Ending ruined everything
.... Why do 5hey mess up so good ideas.....anyway it could be good... But i think it can be abadoned around 50/100chapter cuze its gonna be go tsrd... Very big.........
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-Realms
Example: Like the Six Realms of Buddhism: REALMS Gods/Heaven, REALMS Asuras, REALMS Humans, REALMS Animals, REALM Shungry Ghosts, And REALMS Demon/Hell.
-Dimensions
Example: Parallel, Secular and Virtual Dimensions.
-Planets
Example: Multiuniverses or Thousands of Planets.
There are also three Worlds
-Mortal World
-Celestial World
-Immortal World
Alien, Terminator, Predator, Titan, Monster, God, Asura, Human, Beast, Ghost, Devil, Angel, Elf, Dragon, Phoenix, Fox, Mermaid, Undead, Golem, Spirit, Dwarf, Orc, Giant, Goblin, Djinn, Gnome, Troll, Centaur, Slithereen, Deep One, Skaven, Cyborg, Transformers.
Races that definitely exist and are different
Energy
The Chaos, The Nihility, The Infinite, The Divinity, The Cosmic
QI, MANA, SPIRIT, AURA, PRANA, ASTRAL, ELEMENTAL.
BODY POWER, SPIRITUAL POWER, SOUL POWER
MAGIC, MARTIAL ART, SKILL, TECHNIQUE, CULTIVATOR, MAGICIAN, SCI-FI, SYSTEM.
LAW, DAO, AND, CULTIVATION
I’ve only read up to chapter 7 so far but It’s pretty interesting. The MC just needs a wake up call to push him to grow stronger and things are looking good. I’m looking forward to what the author has in store for us with this novel. I’m pretty excited for this one and I am expecting great things from this great author.
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