Awesome novel! I've gotten completely addicted to your story. The plot is slightly overused but still original. Well, how do I put this... MC going back in time to save the world type of plot, but the objectives, enemies, and settings are totally different from what I've mostly read.
The world is intriguing and unlike anything I've heard before. The fact that there is a 'GOD' ai is still a bit confusing to me and would like to know more about it. I have a lot of questions about it, like why is it evil? Why does the MC want to stop it other than to save the world? How did it become 'GOD'?
The MC is smart, catches on to things quickly, and actually relatable. The story progresses at a perfect steady pace, giving enough time for the reader to actually understand and feel the feelings while also moving fast enough so that the reader doesn't get bored.
The descriptions are on a whole nother level. They are vivid, visualizes the scene and situation perfectly and actually immersive. There weren't any confusing sentences so far and the action parts were really enjoyable to read. Most of the explanations were logical, natural, and some of them are actual facts. I learned several things that I didn't know while reading this novel. Respect to the Author for doing his research!
Lastly, the thing I like most about this is the writing style. It's amazingly appealing, and catches my attention instantly. The sentence structures go well with other sentences and conveys the feelings the author wants. Some of the parts are witty and there are a few relatable sentences and jokes here and there. As a fellow author, I really envy your way of writing and would really love to learn to write like that.
In short, I'll give this book a 9/10. I had to deduct a point because your work was so brilliant it made me jealous! Please teach me your way of writing, I simply can't get enough of it! Definitely going to keep reading to the end, no matter how many fast-passes I might have to sink in the future.
To everyone reading the reviews, I would 100% reccommend this, especially if you like system and video-games genre.
PS: I'm actually serious about wanting to learn from you. Would really appreciate if you can teach me.
Heesha is the best after the best author you deserve all the rank here just mysterious how mysterious it is
Grammars not bad but can still be improved other then that I hope you start releasing more chapters. I definitely where the story is headed
interesting.
MC with a brain. i hope the MC can still. have brain and not losing it with more chapters.
at 1 or 2 chapters it seem like that jp novel saving 80.000 gold in another world.
but its actually different, author probably got idea from there ,i don't know.
but so far this novel more interesting or have some interesting plot that i never read before . so yeah i hope this novel get picked
As one of my first novels in this category, this was a great start I really enjoyed the pacing as well as the characters and how they interacted with each other.
This is one of those sweet romance filled novels' where the mc really really loves his wife and doesn't know that his wife is the strongest being in the multiverse. The story is just a slice of life romance novel with bits of the cowardly system here and there and mc's wife showing her cute side here and there. As for whether this is a harem or not, it most likely is as from the 100+ chaps I've read, the mc is liked by many female characters but fret not, mc is fully devoted to his wife and doesn't think from his lower body. The novel has some misunderstanding too. Overall a very good read.
Just one singular character missing........
This is a nice novel! The story development is not slow and not too fast. So far, every chapter has something that actually happened. Not like some novels where some chapters will just focus on his/her thoughts. I look forward to how the story goes. This is actually worth my stone. Too bad it's not included for voting.
its a good start for this novel for me, need more detailed information about mobs , and i just want to know about the frequency of updates ?
I love the character development of Alexis. She is not a weak female lead like many others. Im rooting for her to survive til the end.
The young adult vibe of this novel bring back many memories. Can't wait to read the next chapter. [img=recommend]
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