This is a greatstory, I really hope that they will continue to translate it. I hope that everyone will try to get them to continue with the translation also.
5 stars for the God Level cover. It is by far the most brilliant illustration that I have ever seen in this platform.
-Artistic level 1000
-Genius Artist 1000
-Divine Hands of an Art God 1000
Overall Score 1000
I love this kind of monster trainer romance and from the beginning this romance has remained good, I just think these newer posts have left something to be desired with other people's tournaments and duels, have been too many chapters and it seems like the MC became a bystander.
It also seems that the author has forgotten the other 5 koi from MC, which I really hope to see them evolve.
In addition, a slight development of the story is lacking as: because Wang Tao trusts Ye Qin so much that he had nothing special about two boys being bullied; even though I was short I wanted an explanation of why Tang Yaling knew it would lose to MC; and lastly, beware of the creation of new powers, such as those rings, which were very sudden and without explanation and development at all.
By the way, I'm sorry for my writing, because I'm from Brazil and used Google Translate.
I am more into mature or let's just say older novel contents. I passed the age of reading high school novels, but I would say, you're doing a good job author.
There are some grammatical errors here and there (not obvious though, so it's fine), some spelling mistake as well, but the way the story slowly progresses, is like it. The challenges and management skills of the ML is superb.
I give two and half thumbs up for you.
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aw, my favorite genre but why there is BL, 4 is my highest skor for the apocalypse and game element so it skor don't drop by much, but sorry i'm not gonna look into it good luck with your novel tough
Honestly I can already foreshadow a few chapter without reading it Mc turn trash then die New mc transmigrated from earthA cute lil/older sister or maidHated by clan/sectBullied by them Suddenly mc get old then get his revengeMostly likely a disdainful fiancé
Great novel all I hope is for the author to post more chapters consistently and jest keep up the good work on the novel and don't drop the story
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