Not really good in my opinion. Characters are lacking. Story is weird to say the least. No background explanation at all.
Writing quality was good though.
This is a Burn. The tags and synopsis indicate this is a serious novel. This is NOT a serious novel. It does not belong in the Magical Realism category. Fulfilling the Magical Realism category would require the Author have some memory and care for what he wrote before. Magical Realism is like Sci-Fi. You are supposed to use and follow a set of rules and keep your plot organized and cohesive. If the tags were Spoof, Clueless MC and Comedy, then the right people would have read the novel instead of all of us looking for a serious and plot driven power novel based on the current synopsis and tags.
I really enjoyed the story so far. The reversed genders are quite imaginative. The characters arent bland and the world seems to have a lot of potential for growth that has not been seen yet. Haven't really noticed grammatical errors either, though i dont care about them all too much if they arent horrible.
Overall so far its a good story
I like some of the more abstract concepts this story throws at the reader, like betrayal, and there certainly is a cohesive theme, something that really ties the story together. I will give more feedback later, but I see no reason why this would not have potential after a little editing. Also - I really, really like action scenes like the ones in this story.
well 1 star since i believe it will become a racist nationalistic novel later on so heed my advice fellow readers don't read the book and waste ur time
thou the plot is inspired from japanese light novels and Mangas it's still quite good but still it's ruined by nationalism and feels like is written by a kid
sigh hope the next one would be a better version of this since it will surely have a few versions by different authors
It's a good book for being 15 chapters in. the only problem I have with it is that,
1. grammar needs to be checked
2. when name the skills, please just hit enter so it's not a mess to read
Aside from that, it is very, good just author
The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused
Still waiting for the author to announce why roy has the program and why he is obsessed with killing that person.
There are a bit too many characters and complicated relationships, and I often struggled to remember the names of various fictional characters to keep going. Need to go back and read it all over again.
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how will this story end it seems just like a dark adventure novel that has no progress so far its just I want to see fights and action not let's go kidnap yonome for our own profit
Definitely another hidden gem. This novel is beyond flawless and contains a very commendable writing style. The author's wording is incredibly poetic but not difficult to understand. The transitions at times are a bit confusing but it got clearer the more I read when I got to understand the flow. The novel overall is worth the time to read