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This is your author, Yanglin of Mountain Reliance King.
As I am writing a shameless review for myself, of course, I would have to mark myself full score to compensate for my fragile heart of effort put into the book so far. With forty-three chapters so far, I believe that my slow but steady effort should have created a proper background for this book to continue without feeling too rushed and rigid to the point it missing the slice of life that supposed to be included.
The novel Lan Xian Di, aka Supreme Emperor of Mist, touched on the story of Qin Lan as he followed his own belief to walk the path of cultivation once more as he unlocks the memories about his first, second, and third reincarnations.
It won't be a rushed story for sure, as I'm intended to make this more of a slice of life novel. As I am still inexperienced right now, the story might seem lacking in picturing many aspects of the story. But I'll put effort as it goes to make this novel better in each chapter.
Another part to take note of is due to my OCD health issue, this author of yours will always have difficulty completing a chapter properly. Often, it's because my idea and writing don't match one another in the expected 1500 words and above. It is also my biggest trouble so far as once in a while, producing a chapter end up as a hurdle to me for days and weeks.
But I'll try my best to continue. Webnovel did offer me a contract early when we're at around fifteen chapters, but I hesitated as I'm worried that I couldn't perform as required. Of course, signing one would be great because it means my book will be valued greatly.
I'll end this review here as today is counted as one of the best days for me so far. Do expect a chapter update soon. Wish me better, and stay safe, everyone. I hope you'll continue to support me as I try my best to complete this work.
Thank you.
Mountain Reliance King, Yanglin
You can immediately tell that this is one of those stories that will keep you engaged until the end. I was really surprised at the quality for web novels but this one changed my mind and ill look into other stories now as well.
Great novel the only problem is i finished reading and waiting for update thanks for the novel and thanks for the exp
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I thought this novel was familiar and I now know why. It’s a ripe off of Long Live Summon. The only difference is the MC doesn’t have copy abilities and slowly evolves and levels up with hard work. This story is very unsatisfying and everything just works out for the MC. There is no reprocessing for using a spell 12 lvls above his own multiple times and seems to have unlimited energy reserves. Also the story feels as though it was just put from pen to paper. Like they wrote “here is a fight. This and this happens. Fights over and done” it’s written as though there was no thought out into it. Like they wanted to write a fight scene, but the scene in real quick and continued with the story so they can return to the fight scene later to add details and never did. This novel feels more like one of those Chinese knock offs or hastily created movie with a similar name as a big box office movie just to make a quick buck
The translation is horrible,the naming of the powers are just as bad overall it is a bad of not horrendous story and a failure as an author. Good luck boy ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️ ciao.
Lol, the premise is interesting, wonder what will she do later and what excuse will mc give? If only they could release some chapters to see whether it's worth reading or not.
Let me just say your in for an experience. The story drags you in and won't let you go. As this is expected from a top 10 book author. and everything author-chan said is very true. so I recommend u read it
The free chapters display an actual good story, the sign in stuff is a well known theme but the setting of the story can make up for it.Sadly the chapters 41+, the paid ones, are a big downgrade in translation quality. Feels like MTL.
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The premise is cool but the MC kills this story. In chapter one the MCs best friend says he acts like 15 year old. In a playful manner. False. Take that as a fact! The MC acts like a 13-15 year old ****. Someone who lacks the life experience of a 30. Which the MC claims to be. What makes it worse is that the MC knows about stores and games that have a fantasy setting but freaks out about everything. This is a wasted book with a very annoying MC.
Hello everyone, I am finally reviewing this work of mine for the first time ever after 462 chapters! *Caresses his beard in utmost seriousness*Before anything, let me give you a short version of what you will be getting yourself into:Think of Virus (MC) as Pinocchio, only, instead of a doll, he’s an extremely advanced artificial intelligence who coincidentally jumps back in time to our current Earth.Anyway, the Pinocchio of our story who had been just an artificial boy his entire life enters a biological body, thus becoming a real boy!Now, the real boy of our story together with futuristic knowledge at his beck and call starts cultivation while actually utilizing that very knowledge of science and technology.However, now that he’s a real boy, he starts experiencing problems and issues he never thought were possible.As you read into the story, the world will get bigger and bigger as unexpected developments, both small and large, will take you by surprise and leave you flabbergasted.+++++If you ask me, is [The God Virus] worth my time and more? I can only say try it and decide for yourself, don’t let my or anyone else’s bias affect you. Still, if you did indeed decide to give it a shot, persist through some of the pre-cultivation slow burn and neophyte writing at the earlier chapters and get to the real cultivation stuff and you’ll see what you had nearly missed.+++++Some of the things you can expect to see in the story:1. Cultivation is extremely unique, I don’t just randomly add stage names and say he gathered even more energy this time or whatnot and broke through from the first level to the second level, then from the second level to the third level, and so on! There is a specific system of cultivation that will make you enjoy immersing yourself in the process as you get to the real cultivation stuff!2. Virus is very smart in brain matters, an extremely intelligent anti-hero main character that doesn’t fear destroying all those hindering his path if he wants to, I say this with confidence and you will agree unless you forget what Virus’ main goal in living and the core of his personality is at each specific point in the story.3. The writing quality increases as you advance, you will feel the writing quality leveling up the more you read into the story. However, even in the earlier chapters, you won’t have any difficulties understanding the sentences, they flow smooth enough, only that the writing quality may be lower comparatively.4. Let’s get this out of the window as well, Virus is no saint, he’s not selfless, I mean he’s named Virus for God's sake, did you expect him to be like Mother Teresa? *Flings aside his white beard violently*5. Yes, there’s a deep romance happening, but it won’t be the main focus of the story.6. There is so much more I can say, but why should I say it when you can read it and decide for yourself? Anyway, if my brief introduction hooked you, then I guess you’re in the right place.
