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I have to say, the first chapter was well written. I also do like the concept of a sin system, it's very unique. I can say that , from the first chapter and the unique concept, this novel has a lot of potential. You've got my interest, so wil keep an eye out for further chapters.
overall the quality is genuine and this mf wrote 18 chapters in a month.. the plot quite eye catching, I'm amazed by the story line it seems like a reality fiction thanks for sharing such a vibrant story
Wonderfully worded, beautifully told and completely exhilarating. The author is doing a fantastic job telling this story. Every word describes what is happening so purely, so beautiful that it’s easy to envision. The author is giving the readers something to see and feel. Not just read. Read it!
Dear author, I have a question for you. If you don’t mind.
Can u add more chapters pz,,, the story is good and am hooked at it,,, plz finish it ........................... ..........
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE THIS BOOK. PLEASE FRIENDS, DOES ANYONE KNOW WHERE I CAN READ ANY OF HIS CONCURRENT BOOKS. I JUST LOVE HIS PROFICIENCY IN LITERARY TALENT.
Nico Robin alias l'Enfant Démoniaque, est l'Archéologue de L'Équipage du Chapeau de Paille. Nico Robin est recherchée depuis qu'elle a huit ans, date à laquelle elle fût reconnue comme la dernière des démons d'Ohara, obtenant une prime de79.000.000.Elle est la fille de Nico Olvia. Elle fut présentée comme étant la Vice-Présidente de Baroque Works connue sous le nom de Miss AllSunday et était le bras droit du chef de cette organisation, Crocodile. Robin recherche le Rio Ponéglyphe afin de découvrir la "Véritable Histoire" du Siècle Oublié, elle est la dernière personne sur terre à savoir lire les ponéglyphes. Elle est la septième membre de L'Équipage du Chapeau de Paille. Sur Tequila Wolf, le numéro d'esclave de Robin est le 3926.
Just a great book I have never read a parody of tropes in such a manner honestly I never thought it would be this great when I started but it's just awesome I cannot explain how much I enjoy this
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Within one day of writing, I've learned a lot from this. Remember to post comments and leave a review if you feel its worth it!
Wow! This story is top-tier!!! The characters are so funny and i cant wait to see the next chapters if only it will be continued
Out of the 51 chapters posted, I have read 10 chapters. The story is interesting. The stability of updates is good, Story is developing nicely. The character design is OK. A world background is good but it is not specified which era it is or what place it is.
There are some issues with typos and spellings. The capital for 'I' is used less and the small i is appearing. At some places the sentences start abruptly and the inverted commas of the speech portion get left behind. These mistakes do not however interfere with the reading of the book.
I would suggest you run your draft through an online grammar checker. It will get rid of many of the errors. I also do that otherwise little mistakes tend to creep in.
All the best.
Ok, so I will be truthful here. I just finish reading the first chapter, the grammar is great though I was confuse on what is happening on quite a few lines because it contains a lot of words and sadly I can't follow. But, oh well It looks good anyway. it's just the first chapter still quite a lot to check out. Imma continue reading