All in all, this novel seems pretty generic when placed among similar novels of the same genre. Nonetheless, it's a nice way to kill time.
One very giant peeve that I had while reading was that almost every single damn conflict was due to the opponent thinking with their dick and being envious of the MC having such a beautiful companion. When the MC proceeds to beat them up, they apparently always have a high ranking brother/cousin/uncle/whatever to 'avenge' them. You see where I'm going here? This hasn't happened just once or twice, but EVERY time the MC has solved the previous one, the next randomly pops up. So damn annoying. It's so damn forced.
Even the chance encounter with the damn girl in the first place was forced af. Randomly chancing upon a girl with peerless features and talent in a small town probably not even on the map? Come on.
This story is really good. The progress is going good.. Author has done good work explaining relationship between characters. The MC is Op and the update stability is the best. Author keep up the good work and let the chapters rolling.
excellent novel, waiting for more more more more. .. .. .. .. .. . .. .. .. .. .. .. ..
I was really enjoying this novel! But it seems like it's been dropped by author, which is really a shame! Honestly I don't like the author's other works, I have zero interest in op simps who spend their time building harems. (If that's your thing cool but it's not for me lol)
Tbh I'm mostly upset I'll never get to see MC finally use his stat points (on intelligence!) it's really bothering my OCD
Wow, I'm first to review this novel! I hope this is good as it looks really cool! Is this kingdom builiding??? OMG! It's too good to be true...
Really loving the story so far! The pacing is a bit fast but I think that’s one of the things I like about it lol. I’m curious to see if you are going to bring in any characters from the original story as well. (hope that you do!) Thank you for the good read and I hope it continues! 10/10
Extremely fun to read and one of the best system type novels that i have saw in webnovel with an good background of the world and characters that you can realy imaginate
I don't read this genre but still I recommend it to someone who enjoy reading action, exploration, and tunnels. Skye is a remarkable person n your novel. The idea is fresh and interesting. I enjoyed how you depicted events from the viewpoint of the main character while keeping the side characters alive.
Overall amazing concept and unique on this app but the update times plus word count is bad because just a thousand words every week it kind of a short chapter so I would recommend adding some"fluff" like more detailed description of the MC or other characters because all I know about the mc is it has 4 legs and is red.
A nice novel it is.
Thats all I can say, I will give 5 stars idk why.
Oh btw all reviews shouldnt be less than friggin 140 characters what the heck I dont want to write long reviews on the world background/character design because I think I couldnt write better than the authors.
need more chapters and daily updates
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Good job ? .