I usually stay clear of authors who drop novels bc they tend to repeat. Story was decent but not god tier as some of reviews say. mc is mediocre but not beta so didn't bother me much. The world background and character design are a bit average. Good writing quality and decent story development, unfortunately story was dropped so no further development.
It's a great read. The story advancement is wonderful and the MC is very thoughtful about his goal. Has a unique system and a great world background. Thanks for sharing this with us Author-san. I hope you don't drop this novel.
Epic, just epic! I can't say anything else without spoiling things. Another awesome novel in the HideousGrain Multiverse!
I swear I think it's his best work to date!
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Concept is cool but everything else is pretty bad.
The MC doesn't even try to hide it, it's pretty bland, MC is prideful and 2D, it's brain-dead is the best description.
If you want something generic, boring and overly sensitive but also prideful MC turn off your brain and read this.
Hi, I'm the author.
*All reviews here came 100% naturally because I never ask for review swaps.
*The story has no system, no incarnation, no transmigration, no "one man gets many girls." 1 male will have 1 female love interest, and you will see how they interact.
*There are funny moments in their dialogues. :-D
*The goal of the story is to highlight issues and people overlooked by the real world. The "cases" or "problems" in my novel are based on REAL history or TRUE crimes. The characters will try to solve those extraordinary issues together. (If you're curious, feel free to ask which one is based on what).
I'd appreciate your support! And I hope I win the contest! :-)
Uhhhh so while I'm taking the big one I decided to open webnovel an decided to check if returning transcendent have come to webnovel... AND I WASN'T DISAPPOINTED LEZZZGOOOOO VAIN
This story is amazing, the characters feel genuine at least the main and secondary ones the rest don't really matter lol. The different Qi's reminds me of reverend Insanity which is cool however what I didn't like was the author making the the MC's assistant start with fire qi which is constantly used by every mc out there and it's just annoying seeing as he had 6 elements to chose from and he chose fire but it's fine just a minor thing. As for world building it's very good but I just hooe the author doesn't introduce stuff too quick and then gets overwhelmed by everything and then forgets about something. Story is developing nicely I just really wish to see more of the family. Also going back to the Qi's I really wish that the author introduces more characters with uncommon qi types like poison,sound,wood,water etc However these are just my preferences and the author can do what he wants. As for the updates they are very frequent just that the chapters are short or atleast they feel short. but the quality isn't really dropping so just keep doing what your doing author and you'll be fine
I love the world that's been developing, and all the characters involved. in terms of close plot think of Mulan. my only problem at this point 32 chapters in is the MC has no agency, she has no reason to be doing what she's doing aside from plot demands it. that being said her struggle is real, she has no easy button aside from the fact that she's fast.
I have yet to read the story when I have begun reading I will delete the review and write another one. A piece of advice the chapters are in the form of a huge paragraph. U can split the paragraph into smaller paragraphs and leave spaces between them so that it will be clearer, easier to correct mistakes, easier to read, and more appealing to read.
T is novel too good. Almost couldn't believe eyes of my mine. have been finding move with mystery, action and vicious+CAlm headed+ emotional MC finally found one. thanks you for writing his!
Guys if yall don't like MC sharing his woman, avoid this at all costs, don't be naive like me hoping something changed.......
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