I was interested in this novel when I read the reviews. To be honest, I made several attempts to start reading this novel. But I assure you, if you overcome this, you will look forward to every chapter. At the moment I rate it as 5/5.The author has created an interesting world and characters. I advise you to get acquainted with this work.
Excellent novel. I hope you won't give up and will continue to complete it. City of Hope is like the last hope of humanity, and I love it...
Desperately waiting to read more. Super happy I found this novel.
haven't read the book yet, I'm currently here for free pass?
is this translated or original , the theme seems translated and the story telling
After a long time, I finally found a good novel. The protagonist is not a fool but a smart young man, this is what I liked the most about the main character. Otherwise, a lot of novels nowadays introduce us with so-called intelligent protagonists when in reality, they are dumb and stupid. The novel is only at its starting point, but it has already started showing how deep it can be and how much potential this novel truly has. LOVED IT ?.
The writer has great storytelling skills. Amazing work ??
I feel the same as many reviewers. It’s a fun story but the grammar is not good.
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The story has a very interesting and unique premise with a twist on the inner demon troupe where the MC is the inner demon.I can get a good of the character’s personality and motivations due to it being stated so bluntly, but often the characters actions don’t end up following the description like the MC being described ad emotionless and uncaring but still using polite language and the insanity is also not shown very well. Certain characters also act completely against the atmosphere set up which breaks immersion like when a certain character feels jelous of another character when they should be overwhelmed by dread of being in the presence of an entity leagues above them.The writing style is very much one where the audience is told what to feel and think instead of building the climax and tention and emotion using the characters and interactions to build an atmosphere.Dialoge of multiple characters is put into one paragraph with too much description of the implications (stating that a character is cautious in the middle of the conversation and that point not being a part of the conversation whatsoever as well as being contradicted in the very same chapter). Flow between character dialogue is akward and stiff as well with all the characters using the same vocabulary (a old character using the same words and having the same way of speaking as a teenager where they should have vastly different styles).CThis story has a the blocks need to build a great story, it just needs plenty of polishing of multiple chapters to the point where I think rewriting would be easier than fixing all the inconsistencies.Pro tip, I would suggest creating character cards to help keep track of the characteristics and personality of your characters when writing to prevent inconsistency and constantly asking yourself what that character would do considering the personality given.MC’s inner emotional struggle has been brought up but is not given the care and attention I think it deserves and has a lot of potential to be fleshed out similarly to the striggle of Saitama of One Punch Man.Would suggest on focusing on that since mc is comparble to the strongest in his world right out of the gate.
The few chapters that I've read clearly depicted the main character's suffering. Her fears and insecurity were alarming, bringing me endless suspense. The book is also veiled in mystery. It's a nice one.