Son of a b*tch, we had a discord of trsnlators doing this stealthly but now they jave to stop to avoid this, first chestnut now them.
Now we got to pay for lower quality and like it
Finally caught up with the plot!
Okay. First things first. Dawson Blight. He is the best character. Has only like... Three lines but the dude is a badass. Okay I like the story. Yeah that's basically it? It is a slow burn clique anime story full of jokes, and action. It is silly and has some really great moments. So far I don't really have anything I hate about the story? Others might hate it with how the story flows, but I think it is great!
haaah... dont read... it a typical: your sister is not your sister and she's OP but not OP, your above average but your still average, everyone hates you and you have no friends oh but you have best friends? (so you don't NOT have friends).. your power level 9000 but even the pre schoolers can kill you; kinda novel thats all over the place... I could not for the life of me push past chapter 7
Nice novel. Enjoyable . Readable. ...................................................................................................................
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Its okay. The characters are very not not funny not funny funny. Its a funny novel. But it needs more chapters. Even though the novel might be new I suggest that you make 10 chapters before you actually release your novel. Think about it, you can go back and chech your spelling after you release your chapters.
amazing novel until 200 Chapter after 183 Chapter it becomes concidence chichè. let's take one example trying to find one organisation and by mistakes mc got wind from totally different sources nothing to do fbi(until later) guess what fbi also got it same time . guess what they meet on airport . guess what when they were leaving they sit on same chairs. guess what they again meet after 3 or 5 chapter totally different situation but same fbi ppl . guess what you can bleed in game guess what it will not disappear . guess what npc are I intelligence that they can tell what species it is just after seeing blood. guess what vampire king is idiot king . (who make him king?) . guess what FBI can find out what mc did in last hour but couldn't find a blast which is going to happen in park (solved because of mc).
I really like the whole plot so far and cant stop waiting for more! Please make more as I love the story and characters. ??????????
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