diabolicdiablo
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A beautiful and interesting story, I advise you to read itOnly the writer should spell more chapters
Anyone who is a fan of classic Sci Fi should read this book. Also fans of classic whodunits cozy mysteries or not so cozy ones. We'll worth the read!
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I don't like it. Firstly he doesn't act like a hardened soldier, he acts like typical isekei mc who helps people and behaves un-realistically for a soldier. I mean he is a being engineered for WAR!! but then he meets 2 random locals fights them, then heals them and then jokes around with them. He compromised his position like that and then offers the local technology and other help just like that. It would make more sense for him firstly to observe how the world works (incognito!!) before interacting like that and making promises. Moreover, if he has a huge technological advantage he doesn't need compromise with weaklings again he is an engineered sci-fi (supersoldier). You should not made the mc as a soilder but maybe as a diplomat or somthing then I would understand,
Honestly, I enjoyed reading this novel. The first chapter piqued my interest because the vampire girl is somewhat funny Lol?????????
Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.
Pure trash. 30 great Voidwalkers who were legends when they were alive behaving like perverted otakus, disappointing. 15 Chapters in and there is no progress at all
Good idea, bad execution is really all you need to know, but you may like it if you read it, it isn't horrific or anything, and some people have reviewed that they love it, although I think I may need to check the authenticity of those reviews......
I love this book. I have lost count of how many times I have reread it. The writing quality isn’t the best, the characters (other than the main) are slightly 2-dimensional, and the overall plot is a bit cliche. HOWEVER, the character development is great, and the dialogue is natural. Mike definitely feels like an edgy, and neglected, kid just entering his rebellious phase, which most of you can relate too, I’m sure. This novel may be very rough around the edges, yet it keeps drawing me back due to how natural the characters feel, and how natural their decisions seem. Mike makes decisions that feel completely realistic for the angsty youngster he is. This is completely different from most novels on this platform where most characters are so forced it becomes painful to continue reading, or are so obviously written with minimal thought that I want to take away the author’s keyboard and beat them with it. Certainly, there are times reading this novel where I want to bonk the author on the head and ask, “What were you thinking???” Even still, I have come to thoroughly enjoy the experience of reading this novel. I am likely to continue rereading this novel many times to come.
While I am a bit tired of the MMORPG theme at times, I can't stop reading this genre. And this one, in particular, turned out to be a very good read, I liked the characters and the development of the story. It has good potential waiting for how it evolves and more updates.
Amazing I recommend it ............................................................
