Just read outside of time the translation is pretty the same as beyond time scape and its far ahead
Read up to chapter 453.
There are 5 year olds with more "EQ" than this guy, one second he is saying smart things, the next he's a m*r*n. It's bizarre, it's a shame as the rest of the novel is good besides the unlikeable MC. Even when he is 20+, is doesn't get better.
I think an even greater offender is how much effort the author puts in to try and blend plot armor in 'naturally'; he will provide robust explanations and cover every angle to make it reasonable as to why the MC is safe or will be safe if he does X, Y, Z but all it does is kill narrative tension and come across as too convenient; the universe perfectly aligns so the MC experience no setbacks.
He constantly shows off and garners attention while apparently wanting to keep a low profile but never suffers any losses which further exacerbates the lack of character development. So weird when I want something bad to happen to the MC so he can grow up.
LOVELY NOVEL LOVED IT TO THE CORE
It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet.
this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it.
maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done.
author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.
I'm giving this a 5 since I wrote it. And also, people like it for some reason. To those that like it, thanks and I hope you stay tuned for more.
For those who just discovered this novel, it is what it is but it's not exactly what you think it is. It's better if you just read it to be honest.
hundred percent agree that's why i don't believe "if someone throws you a stone then throw them back with bread" i also hate annoying fmc i wish i could eradicate that dumb mc and annoying bitch fmc
Do spoil I am a lazy person 😔
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hes trolling yall
haha its okay its not a big deal no offense taken
You can think of it as its chinese brother