it's generic in a way that it has the normal cliche but it's still a good read since I like the MC'S character. From the synopsis I thought it would be one of those recently trending novels that the MC would get stupidly OP in 2 chapters and I thank God it wasn't one of those trash.
I like this book because it combines a bit of that "DnD" vibe within a modern, "real-life" setting. I also liked how it got straight to action rather than a long, drawn out prologue.
Wish there was more! So much more! This was a great book and I’m so happy for all the characters! I’m so glad that this book was written, as I needed it in my life.
Goes premium after just 20 chapters...
Goes premium after just 20 chapters...
From the title itself I can already guess that this novel is going to be like those stories where the MC will train other characters of the story to become powerful and will have a Kingdom-building touch. I love to read stories where it isn't going to be a one-man show and it involves building territories, so I'll be giving this story a chance. I hope the author won't disappoint me.
A unique cultivation novel and better than most generic ones. Easy to read, not that many grammar errors, and an interesting protagonist to follow is the equation for a good novel.
Keep it up, Author LOABA! >3
garbage story and lazy writing, full of your usual brain reducing trope (npc behavior, dementia author,cabbage beauty(smell like usual pokemon harem) ,etc) read status : chapter 1~20
for future reader this is an clear red flag story.personally i would suggest you to save yourself by skipping this kind of novel early.
done for today poison intakes bye fellow reader.
So far the story is great!!, I like how the character designs are detail. The story is got a lot of mystery so many questions?? That need answers... I'm already hooked...
Reads like a modern fairy tale, deep descriptions of place and characters. It really pulls you along from accident to incident a very satisfying read with a lot to digest after it all. Highly recommend!
Dude, I've come this far, but you have to explain some things now. First of all, in what kind of novel is he reincarnated as a hero? Why does he know the story down to the last detail and forget about this seer? And what's with the hero who dies at the end!?!? This story (the one Mc read) is not good at all. The fact that he remembers everything might be due to his memory ability in the shop but that's another problem! You have not introduced this system very well. For example, what do the luck stat do? Is he really a lucky person right now? What is the limit of the abilities in the shop? And why doesn't it show up in the system? For example, he bought a training room or something. If I hadn't looked at past chapters, I would have almost forgotten about it.
And most importantly, when did he get to the point of doing so many experiments with plants and beasts? I've never seen anyone become so knowledgeable by reading a fantasy book. I'd rather he tried to learn something.
I mean, if you look at him, he has a system. He knows the plot down to the last detail. He knows the whole plot and he still fails miserably. Man, if any other Xianxia MC had some of his skills, he'd be Op in 50 chapters. But he suffers so much because of fate and that b♡♡h called seer.
I'm not saying the story is bad, but it's always frustrating. And yes, I hope he tortue that s♡♡t stalker seer in the future.
Well, this is the first ever novel to give put real-life details of the words and matters that are not normal talk about like this here.
The story starts promising but with an extremely bad pace, 80 ch. for only two days and then a week in 10 ch. making an inconsistency in pacing. Also the mc in the zanza development arc is contrary to the first arc, just wanting to change everything to modern standards forgetting he is in older times and as he already explained first he has to adapt, but this doesn't happen. Also the interest for him creating a competitive market of modern times is ridiculous, considering he has a monopoly of goods that are groundbreaking, thus he don't need that competitive prices.In general the story is good with interesting concepts such as the army scheme and world building but the mc cannot manage to get a defined personality: does he want to conquer, develop economy, protect himself or let debauchery consume him, is he a good person, is he bad, neutral. It isn't clear what he wants or what he is so the mc becomes a character with inconsistencies that damage the plot and development of secondary characters.