NanaSmithh
I like the story it is great thank you author
Loveable cast of characters.Plot twists.Philosophical.Psychological.The story has been going amazingly well. My favourite things about this web novel are the characters and the phenomenal use of symbolism. Keep up the good work.
The good read and my kind of webnovel i love the characters especially the plot twist! I also live the artistic and lively visuals being illustrated as the story goes.
No, world building included. The word mage/sorcerer/enchanter keeps interchanging. It first said magic affinity is born with it and next we know you can increase it. the sect leader was shocked that someone at enchanter lvl had let's say lvl 3 affinity when in the first chapters it was mentioned that the so called holy maiden had lvl 3 magic Affinity since she born like WTH.
This monkey is supposed to be in the zoo for the amusement of humans, a stupid and naive trash monkey who trusts people, they give him a dose he doesn't know and drink, it's a Chinese-style novel rubbish and a lot of stupidity, the hero stupid monkey trying to establish a relationship with humans, if they were humans they would put him in the morgue Or get rid of him, of course in a stupid story they will become petty lovers and friends
Good story line and I like the character development. The writing is occasionally not fluid grammatically. I’ve read several game based stories and the author still keeps it interesting.
Shameless thief. Write your own story instead of stealing other people's work! Some effort you put in doing nothing at all. Great work! You lazy bum!
It's a really good plot so far, fast-paced. You might want to review and edit your chapters... And your status of updates could be a bit more, anyways, all the best...
Kyyyaaaa your story is really unique not like those over powered thingy but he done it in aproper way and help those in need and also not like those overpowered lead they chose people that are powerful but not people that are storng will and had average talent
I love thos story. It's slow-paced and occasionally it seems like nothing is happening, but it's still an enjoyable read. I wish the translation had better editing though.
I have really liked the way how author has taken time to slowly build relationship between characters ,cultivation background and give us a brief overview of the world. I see high potential just hope it follows something like espionage or military conquest and not just cultivation.
the book is a really nice book. but its a pity it only has 191 chapters and the book has been on hiatus since 2022 November.
