.Story become shity with time, strong start not going to lie but author start to put some no sense thing because he afraid of change the original story.
i am giving an honest review , i know you have got inspiration from other novels but in other novels it was not blunt as your novel 1st chapter , atleast there should be emotions and all , in the novel mc got pain and he said 'argh just like that half an hour pass .....after 2nd flaw - when you write you suddenly changed the perspective like 1st to 3rd pov it so sudden that it becomes annoying ......like from 'I' to 'He' and after he suddenly become a serene and calm as he was not got to surreal pain at least there should be some emotions man , it's like blunt - yeah i got transmigration yeah ... is it real ..oh yeah ... and also this he also know he is an 'extra' what does extra means in this .....i got it means side character but what does it sudden i am extra then i will steal the hero things or artifacts etc.etc.....i got this it it's too blunt at least edit your 1st chapter to get proper reading atleast ..if you don't like my opinion you can delete it but yeah you should read first your 1st chapter in reader perspective or read other novel where you got inspired ...
please add some more chapters I've been waiting
Good story and nice progression so far. ?
not my kind of book, but pretty well written
Wow! This story is really something. The amount of detail put into the prologue and the description of the fire abilities are really immersive. I'm so excited to read what happens during the fight.
One of the hidden gems in webnovel,good story,well paced,good humor and im I'm actually curious how it didn't get enough exposure so I'm rooting for the author to keep it up,and it might get into top 100 soon enough and hopefully it will not get into premium,coz that's how good of a story is this novel
This novel is on the lower side of my list but it still on my list. A lot of grammar error but it got better add the story progress. It ranking is now in the top 10 on the list. Thank for the work.
Cool start!!! Non-trivial, fascinating plot and I hope for a further interesting storyline. I'm looking forward to more chapters. Highly recommend!!!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
The story is great - aside from the pure amount of content and the frequency of updates, there is the amazing world-building - the magic system, stats and the quests.The idea to make the MC always be accompanied by someone is a really smart idea especially when it comes to the comedic aspects of a story.I like the speed at which the story progresses, the MC gets new spells and increases their stats quickly, but that is to be expected at low levels.My only suggestion is that the combat scenes tend to be pretty short - I understand this may not be a combat-centric series but I think they dealt with the boar a bit too quickly for example.Overall great series with an interesting setting that is rewarding to read thanks to the character progression.
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