NanaSmithh

Translation seems to be fine. Book writing seems to be very *******ish, with rules and explanations all over the place. Book is written in chronological order but explanations for events and the “system” are unclear and explained at seemingly random times, usually in the form of garble.Story appears to be somewhere in between a comedy and a cultivation adventure novel with game elements, but it doesn’t really succeed with either and is neither funny or intuitive.Author has an addiction to using girl-related analogies to explain his feelings regarding certain topics.The actual reasons for events in question are poorly written and glossed over, story is not up to standard.