Thank you all for the support
This is good
this is awesome story next thor
loooove this book but you left me on the edge of an orgasim that never came
It’s incredible story and intriguing .........
I have to talk about Lu Chengjing because THIS man is doing the most with the least and I am OBSESSED. Remember how he was at the beginning—cold, distant, barely looking at her? Now look at him. He's the one who submitted her documents without being asked. He went to the political department to cancel the divorce application. He stood on the training field and let a soldier who was TWO SECONDS OVER the limit get away with NO extra laps. TWO SECONDS. This is a man who used to penalize for HALF A SECOND. His soldiers are literally gossiping about whether an old iron tree finally bloomed. The text says: "He couldn't quite explain why his mood had inexplicably improved after leaving the testing station." He doesn't know why he's happy. He's a man who doesn't understand his own emotions, and that's what makes it so adorable. He's just... standing there, fingertips brushing his utility belt, looking at the courtyard wall, thinking about this woman who came from far away. And Lin Shuyao—god, the woman is a rock. She's eating dried beans with brown rice, rough in her throat, washing it down with water, not a single grain wasted, then immediately cleaning up the kitchen. She's not playing the victim. She's not complaining. She's just... existing with dignity in conditions that would make most people miserable. And she's not willing to take even the slightest advantage from anyone. The dynamic between them is so interesting because neither of them is saying anything. He doesn't tell her he believes in her. She doesn't tell him she's capable. They're just... orbiting each other, and the tension is in what's NOT said. That's how you write a slow burn, people.
Werewolves and witches? EPIC! This is finally a romance with some plot to it!
your story Is amazing author ...keep up the good work ...
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Similar to other Chinese novels of this type, it is solid. The -1 score really comes from the fact that it was a bit hard to read at the beginning (maybe just me). There wasn't anything new, as is typical with these stories—there are a million similar ones in Chinese literature. However, I can’t recall any particularly annoying elements except, perhaps, the ending, which, as usual for these types of novels, felt lackluster. But at least there is an ending.
So, a rating of 4 from this random reader.
It's actually a delightful novel. The protagonist exhibits remarkable strength in not lashing out at his circumstances or retaliating with hate. He is more composed and mature than many readers who would give low ratings, like one or two stars. People can indeed crumble under immense injustice, but some persevere, focusing on the silver lining and maintaining their integrity, choosing not to dwell on negativity and instead channel their energy into meaningful pursuits.
Regarding the plot twist where he chooses the earl's daughter over the elf they shared a challenging time with, despite the latter's potential longevity, it's a sigh-worthy decision. Sometimes, these kinds of choices lead to unexpected outcomes.
i'll give it a chance, i was looking for something "new"
Hmm looks like there's going to be a long break huh. Hays, I was really looking forward for more