Indeed always spare the female and kill the male well said friend
This is actually very refreshing and unique, the writing is immersive and captivates you as soon you start reading, the only problem is its updating rate I wish it had more chapters tbh, but overall it's very good I hope the author keeps writing.
the idea isn't bad it's just lacks proper execution , the first mistake u made is not giving the main character a proper backstory at the beginning of the story , a backstory allows us to know why the mc is so resourceful in the wild ,how was he able to sneak up on the boar without being noticed , it lets us know what kind of character the mc has and it lets us know why the mc has good looking physique without a proper backstory it makes everything the mc does feel like it's coming out of know where , also your main character is coming to conclusions to fast without proper explanation or thinking , I Can except if he guessed he was transmigrated , but the mc shouldn't have figured out he has soul magic by just using it once and progression with the power is a litt little bit to fast , also the mc is in wilderness , creating a harem of beast girls should be the last thing on his mind , it makes him look like somebody who doesn't have common sense and him thinking of turning an animal into beast girl is weird and out pocket, if u wanted to add that sheep girl , u could have just had the MC turn the sheep into waifu by mistake or accident , that way u could have added the sheep girl and it wouldnt make the main character come across as an idiot and its less weird
as for the rest , there are too many chapters for how little the story progressed , these 10 chapters can easily be compressed to 4 chapters . That's all i have too say , u have potential u are just not using it properly let me give u advice , anytime u write a chapter , read it before hand and ask yourself is there anywhere i can improve and making it better or more exciting
Embark on a ruthless journey of vengeance and survival as a broken hero rises from the shadows, facing dark trials and forbidden desires. Unmissable! ???
absolutely fantastic i loved it....will read the rest when its out!
Great read.
I guess there will be another book, this one has no ending
Great story.. thanks author
I was going to read the story but knowing it has a bad ending, I think I’ll pass!
This book remainded me 'My Husband Wants Me Dead'. Somehow it was forced to be completed too. Coz some problems hadnt been resolved like a reader said in the comment section, but at least it gave us a better ending. Not like this. Not clear at all. Better check the ending before read a book before.
great story.
sadieperez9... what is the full order for this series? I want make sure I don't miss any. I know you have so many on Goonovel and it's had to keep them straight sometimes. I love reading these kinds of stories and books and i love it when they have depth and continue. can't wait to read them all!