It is a really good story. It is a one of a kind story where mc is not strong but a cripple instead. It's unlike other cultivation novels and mc is not arrogant(or can't be arrogant cause his identity might get blown) and just wants to live a peaceful life
Well it is a great story, nice details and such, although a bit too much drama for my tastes. Still I noticed that you included some details in starbound mods that actually make sense. Although their is a detail I noticed, I don't believe Novakids have mouths. And there are a few spelling errors scattered around. Still not bad, definitely something to read.
Whoa! Really a unique style of writing, I must say, this is my first time reading this kind of fantasy genre and it was super intriguing. The way you describe the scenes are lit and yes, even the plot itself is interesting. I would recommend this book to all Fantasy lovers! Enjoy, and thank you Author!
This novel possesses an interesting world and premise, my problem with it is how dumb the MC is. I can forgive the OP MC overhaul, but what I cannot forgive is how he tries to justify and explain how everything he does is for "justice" and that he is a "kind hearted student"...oh my god, give it a rest already.
so far(Ch42) the novel is pretty good compared to many other novels. The mc's attitude(calm and not stupid/naive) and the world background are interesting. without saying to much spoilers. The mc needs to go through trials in a trial world. the trials are in tiers and the mc is one of the lucky ones to be the 1st tier. Hope the novel stays good as so far it looks like a newly formed gem that just needs time