Got to the second chapter before I had to put this down. Author, too much inconsistency. Stating the MC can't react in time and gets knocked out by a little kid. Then saying he has super speed as a trait. Later he dodges bullets and knocks out a grown man with a rock. 20 kph is actually slow, look it up. Ryan is 16 but he acts and thinks like an 8 year old. The police would never leave a minor alone in their house after their parents death. He would be ushered to his next of kin or whoever's agreed to take care of him. A little advice- use google to find out facts before you start writing and stating things as if they are truth. Can't help but imagine someone running full out but moving like a geriatric with a walker. I wish you good luck with your novel, and every thing.
What can I say except intriguing. The title pulls you in by forcing you to ask questions. I like how you gave us a little foreshadowing near the end of the third chapter. What exactly is the third regression I'm on my toes
This novel shows a lot of potential. The writing style is pretty good, and I get what the author is going for with the sentence structure and tone they're using. Sometimes, though there are some odd symbols (like a '='), and it disrupts the flow. Characters seems pretty good, as does the world, and story development. I'll have to keep reading to see what happens next.
really looking forward to more chapters, would appreciate more/week.
Good Novel.Don't drop it.Recommended to cricket lovers♥️
Hilariously bad.I've avoided stories with a peacock, know it all MC for a couple years now and this just reminded me why.So bad all the negative scores rolled over to 5.Hopefully you're reading this instead of going off the review rating and know not to waste your time.
I can sum this entire novel up in a single sentence: “Thank you, Mario, but our princess is in another castle!”I would not recommend this to anyone who dislikes cockroach villains or single love interests with long separations from the MC. Around the third time the MC goes to fetch his one true love only to find out that she’s been kidnapped and brought somewhere the MC won’t be able to reach without getting much, much stronger, the appeal of the whole novel died for me.
Don't bother reading this trash. The MC literally has no power or agency to even control his own life. He's weak and continuously assaulted. Moreover, he's extremely wishy-washy. Read chp63, if u can stomach a weak pussyfooting MC then go ahead. Heck the 'plot' isn't even that great.
The mc and other characters show familial emotions way too soon, as in, like, Romeo and Juliet to soon. I just met you the day before yesterday, we know nothing about each other, but let's treat each other like blood siblings... that type of concern doesn't just appear out of nowhere...
This was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
Caution!I've made a mistake and there is a lot of info dump in the early chapters. Although I cannot guarantee it, I am doing my best not to repeat this in the future. This story revolves on the Main Character Nile who transmigrated in the world full of zombie. I will focus on him and his development. As a newbie author, I know I will make a lot mistakes during this journey. I apologize in advance for that. I am open for critics(no harsh words please), that way I know where I am lacking and what should I improve more. If you have any suggestions and tips to improve my writing, please do tell me about it.
Let's take in a junior sister, so far our life has been to steady?????????????????????????????????????????????☺️??????