The reviews for this novel is abnormalLike seriously, a 4.9 rating? Looks very... Well rigged. Will change my review if it doesn't get deleted and once I finish reading the translated and raw
just a reminder. people who make undertale fanfics often drop because they feel "trapped" in the undertale universe, just remember there nothing preventing you from having a side chapter where the mc goes to a different multiverse. this way you can have an easyer time trying to find ideas and getting unmotivated due to lack of uploads. have a fine day bro.
Get a proofreader, dear god.MC literally is a meathead who only cares about fighting and is so redundant to the point where he will repeat the same thing more than once in a single paragraph.
Pedophil1a warningReally bad ped0philia towards a newborn regardless if they saw his future selfWas alright in the begining but after the female chars it went down hill fast
I absolutely love this novel !!! Must read !! If you are into VRMMORPG , you'll love it!!! I appreciate the author's hardwork in putting out TWO CHAPTERS A DAY ! It just doesn't get boring, i donno how the heck he manages to make it more interesting ALL THE TIME. Btw, Valerian Milo my favourite no cappppp.Good job man,great novel .
This one is better than from almost all trials read available this time..
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Mc is neither simp nor dumb
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Even if he has a cheat, he has to work hard to use it..... it's a good thing
Well, I was skeptical about its 4.8 rating at the starting. But after reading all the chapters up to 126 , I feel it deserves this rating. Hell I have also given it a 4.8 rating. This novel has a lot of potential. Author is doing quite good. I like this types of novels.
A very good LN for people who like MMO LN.
Very good points (general):
- Story and story development
- Characters
- In game Character design
- Reality story is interessting, well balanced and not "too much"
- The author really tries to have originality in some aspect
Good point (for me) :
- More PVE oriented than PVP
- MC is overpowered but he is not the only one
- Secondary characters have a real utility
Bad points :
- not found
Need improvements points (for me) :
- Writing sometimes repeats the same thing a little too much
- but the author could easily remove that by putting a little more description of the item, character level, region background etc.
- We can see that the author wants a balanced story (A overpowered MC who has shortcomings and who needs to progress) and it works but one or two "epic situation" are welcomed (currently Chapter 293)
- [SPOILER WARNING] A little too much luck for the MC friends and family . Hidden races and job are said to be very rare... in fact, the author had a great idea for his best friend (giving hidden job because of the MC jobs) but who know why he hasn't exploited it more.
Such an exciting tone the first chapter has. I am really drawn into the situation the the protagonist is encountering. Think I am in for an adventurous read.
The translation quality for this is decent but the synopsis is a complete lie. There are a lot of annoying cliche factors as well, thought this was one of the better trial read novels this time round, it's not, go read the world's best martial artist one.
It really is great and funny in my opinion the update is a bit slow because author have other works it's better to read it in SCRIBLEHUB the update is earlier.
It's a bit stale for a story tbh, and the content itself is quite monotonous. If you've got nothing better to read for trial and want points, I recommend this then cause you can shut your brain off