(Spoiler Alert!!!) The protagonist has crossed the time to the very distant future and becomes a person who is only at the first level of violet Qi (the lowest!) I think Leng San's grandpa made a good choice that he let his grandson get away from the Asuras, which destroyed the Leng family. The ml is reborn in the next 1500 years along with the Deva named Freya. She's a guardian to protect and support Leng San such as helping him improve his Qi, inventing the potion recipe, teaching the martial arts, etc. And the story progression has continued along with the battle, revenge, and love story. It's worth reading because there are many emotions in this book, and the story telling and translation are the best!!!
I really like the concept behind this book which is different from other books. The only complaint I had while reading this book was lagging grammer and sentence formation. Many times it was hard for me to understand the meaning behind the sentences.
You have also done silly grammatical mistakes like you haven't used full stop (.) in the end of sentences. At some places you have used I instead of he, His instead of her. Please focus on such mistakes.
Your book has potential but no reader will stick to your book for longer if he keeps finding such mistakes again and again.
The beginning is awesome, read all the way till he stays in the Sect, after that drop the novel completely and enjoy sweet dreams, if you continue reading, you'll wish to kill the author like I do. Never have I once tried to drop a novel till now. This **** is pure crap. Need at least 500 more Chapters before it MIGHT get good.
Not bad, but nothing new. You'll be basically reading 'The King of Battlefield' and 'Reincarnator'......................................................................
Nice work
Good storylines but need to be updates more chapters and ml must show some terrific moves in front of fl. Over all story is very nice for reading.
I liked the way you portrayed the teacher. He reminded me of one of mine. The student was so ready to correct the teacher to show their intelligence. I liked that also . I like how you peaked my interest in the introduction by telling a story that you can’t find on the net.
Firstly, too many plot holes
Then character is literally none, no noteworthy characters including mc
World building is ****
Progression is Dufkfibbius wwucbubini
And lastly I enjoyed reading it do it means I have **** taste.
Good luck
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Few chapters are funny and I even kept laughing unknowingly sometimes.I like the concept of reincarnation and this book is also a reincarnated type. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more.I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.