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A successful system genre novel. presentations are good, illustrations are successful too. and the point I find most successful is the updating stability of the novel. It is a novel that I can recommend system lovers to follow as long as you continue at the same pace without reducing the quality of writing.
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It was a solid start to what I believe would be an interesting adventure. Teslan was a fascinating character, I appreciated how realistic his character were. The way he express his feelings in every words, his dreams, his wants, the eagerness to prove himself, even his frustrations and even his hurt and self-pity on being rejected. I would love to follow more of Teslan's story, how he'll eventually find his own space in this crazy world and earn his worth.
i like the novel till ch 180 but.. you have made the MC too naive which i did not like... i hope that you change it fast but it didn't suit a MC.. otherwise i will lose interest in the novel..
I'm really compelled by horror and thrillers so this was definitely up my alley!Writing Quality: The author has a forceful way of making compelling scenes. Incredible storytelling with generosity given to the reader using fleeceable vocabulary.Story Development: The story is well-organized and a lot of the decisions made by characters both protag- and antag- have meaning. Emotional rollercoasters, are the only explainable metaphor, as you'll never have a dull moment in this series.Character Design: In my opinion, all the characters in the series are humanified in some way. Some show greed, wrath, compassion, or sympathy that give the reader a connection whether they're someone you've grown to hate or love.World Background: The world is personified well, and is deeply engaging as I can see myself in the Lost Continent along with the characters of the series. Excellent imagery and personification by Easy_Tiger.An excellent read for those interested in a thriller, action-packed adventure with tons of danger around every corner!
Review after 868 chapters
This is book is fantastic as a lover of
history and fantasy this is a unique twist on the story of Merlin. I plan to use in this review the overall pacing, upload/community, grammer and punctuation.
#1 Pacing:
Personally believe that this book has some fantastic pacing, as a weak to strong genre it showcases a real struggle for Merlin, he has his ups ans his downs and we can feel his struggle throughout the book as he continues life gets that little easier and that little harder. Everything has a purpose and there are long payoffs for those who pay attention. If you like mythology and history, you'll pick up tid bits which you'll really enjoy, many moments left me in a case of picking my jaw from the floor.
#2 Upload Schedule and Community
Avans has a great upload schedule he releases very frequently with usually two a day which is great. He keeps to his promises in regards to bonus chapters for golden ticket ranking and overall ranking pushes.
The community is one of the best I've ever encountered, everyone is kind and friendly and the author does monthly quiz's and voucher giveaways in which he personally runs and he's very active in the chat, watching us theorise while he watching with bated breath.
#3 Grammar and Punctuation:
Throughout the book there is very little in regards to problems, Avans is very on the ball, fixes where possible and everything is just as perfect as you can hope.
So to summerize some Pros and Cons
Pros
World Building is, in a word, magical
The magic system is very interesting and easy to understand.
The use of Bloodlines is also very unique and special in regards to its use and importance.
The pacing is just about right not to fast and not too slow
Will leave you wanting more and you will grow with Emery on his journey
Cons
some of the characters can feel 2 dimensional to begin with but they become fleshed out as the story progresses
Many find problems with the romance at the end of the day its not the main focus but its a tool towards Emerys emotional growth and its still important, plus we have fun debates.
The cliffhangers are killer, they're great but I hate them.
You won't regret reading this book I personally binged the first 110 chapters in one night. I'm sure you will too.
the translator was snickering, not only was the translation in the last chapters much worse, they also began to divide one chapter into 4, and the release schedule is the same. I don't mind if the translator translates less, but let it be in the usual way, without deceiving readers
The normals know too much.
There are so many plotholes and utter stupidness.
Translation is also horrible.
Wouldn't recommend
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Compared to other gaming novels this has a few annoyances
1 not stating time difference (how long is 1 hour in game)
2 not letting others steal loot (idiotic, games are based of fantasy and real life, in real life you can steal)
3 addong the bead into game instead of keeping it separate
4 putting all types of craft under 1 umbrella instead of keeping them seperate
5 allowing mc to use abilities from past life that are not realistic for example the thing he did with frogs shadow teleportation, past life it was either magic or cultivation that allowed him what explanation will ypu give you didnt give any