Unbelievable boring
i logged in Webnovel just to tell author
that your novel is great. pls keep writing. there are many fans who read without logging in, directly from pc. I'll say to them, log in just so you can support the author.
Apologize for giving bad review.. i juz dont like the part with harem...the MC that u build come from nble fmly i didnt expect u to develop him into *** maniac.. (my impression after reading a few chptrs) other than that its good....(already finish reading all chptrs u wrote).... my first thought after seeing the MC bcming *** maniac : "the author must love reading manga" ... well i know this is ur harwork but still to see a man easily seduce by ***, it juz dnt live up to his status as a nble man...
Good novel with OP MC and Likeable harem
Awesome story looking forward to the sequel!!!
Hope can update every day
Some problems in here
1. Grammar ( the subject like he, she, him, her)
2. Time Skip ( so fast, but the mc power progress not )
3. Change POV too much
4. Good foreshadow ( or stupid cliffhanger?)
The one that speak on opening ceremony, who knows so suddenly MC got Angry and didnt show up on next few chapter
5. Stupid Power rank
MC can smash new A Rank but cant beat Queen Spider? the one that he fought at 7 years old, and how old he is when she saved Lily? The way he wasting his time without power up with the so called future Right Hand of Demon King and his Memories, well yeah AMAZING
Well author admit too that he want irritate us with his MC and congrats you got it.
fell in love with this book
The chapters are short, comedy is there.
The plot is genius. No harem.
Releases will take time but im going to do what i can.
Im open for feedback.
Recommended to read? Yeah absolutely!
Uhhhh…. I’m willing to bet whoever is reading this reviews life that this exact novel has appears on webnovel. Or maybe the same premise where he travels back in time, builds a famous monument thing, goes forward in time, builds another, rinse and repeat.
I havnt read this novel but I assume they are VERY similar judging from the description.
If i’m wrong well… Oops?
It has a very bad MAIN CHARACTER but good storytelling
This book has a somewhat generic start, tbh. It is good, but nothing extraordinary.
But the further you progress, it will start to shine.
The details of the world, it’s background and the thought put in it are one of the kind.
Don’t just skim through it, you’ll miss a lot (like the subtile forshadowing, That is very well executed And details that you need in the future. to name just two things)
It is nowhere near perfect. But that is what makes it a masterpiece.
The constant improvement of the already good, to now high Quality that doesn’t seem to stop is fascinating, To say the least.
The Author Is another charm factor. He is very accessible and patient. so If you have questions, don’t hesitate to ask Them.
He is constantly trying to improve the content and everything that has to do with the novel.
Also there is a discord server, if You wanna Join a bunch of idiots that enjoy the book and hanging out. or if you just want to be more connected with the book. #NotSponsort
At last I want to clarify that my comparisons (like good or high quality) are not to the ‘average’ that I have read. but to the books I really like.
So author, if your Reading this:
Please keep up the good work and try to improve your skills even further. I wish you good luck on your way and hope you will have an constant increase of a loyal fanbase, That will tell You if you do something wrong.