It has been 3 months since you last uploaded, will you upload again or should I consider this as dropped (Sorry for my bad English )
The novel is good. I recommend it for readers who are looking for an idol cultivating novel. It just saddens me that, the author is active but didn't continue updating. Overall, Author-nim, job well done.
Bem parece uma boa historia, se não estivesse tão inelegível e bem confusa com os acontecimentos.Você tem que quebrar a cabeça em certos momentos para ente der oque esta acontecendo, vai ter momentos que você vai simplesmente pular pois não entender nada.Espero que o autor(a) evolua na sua escrita pois teria futuro esse trabalho.
Really good idea and start so please more capters
One word is all I need to describe this novel: AstoundingIncredible, that’s two words nowAmazing, that’s three words.Anyway, read it, you’ll love it(Please release my family, zhen)
why is the MC so stupid?
chapter 46, meet random strangers, follow random strangers to a dangerous place
I'm guessing from the context that these 2 are work colleagues of his parents but I'm I the only one that thinks it's so nice of them to offer to give him some money at the age of 19 but did nothing for the last 11 years when the MC and his sister where orphaned at the age of 8 and 6 respectively WTF
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I just read through all of the chapters available for this novel, up to 247, and I must say that I have been thoroughly enjoying this novel.
I didn't have a lot of expectations going in but the quality of the work and the depth that each character and situation had to them truly kept me on the edge of my seat the entire time, making me want to keep reading.
It is a very complex story with a lot of elements that I know some people might not particularly enjoy or may be off putting to them, but getting past the hiccups in the beginning and understanding a bit more about the situation that isn't very apparent on the surface level has been a truly rewarding experience, and I recommend you if you have just wandered by this to give the novel a chance.
Some parts of the story I didn't particularly care for (for example, *perhaps a bit spoiler, just scroll all the way down. I didn't mark the review as spoiler because the larger portion of this review doesn't have any, and this is just for providing some criticism for the Author*
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The introduction of the third world didn't really hook me in to much, and I ended up skipping to the end of the larger arc that happened because I wasn't as invested into it like I was with his original world and the second world he found himself in. It seemed particularly random at first, and the events didn't seem to have much of an important place in the story [though, I may just be ignorant as I hadn't read through it too much. I will say, I've been able to keep up with the story for the most part without getting any context from this part of the story]. Author, one criticism I'd have when you go about this again is to try and give a more solid connection to the new world and the character and his reasons for going there to create more investment for the reader. It seemed forced and out of place the way that it happened.)
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Truly a hidden gem, it's a shame that it is so underrated as I am writing this review, and I can only offer words of praise to the author for giving so much effort into your novel here. Please keep going, I'm excited to see what happens next with the story.
23 chapters in and all I can say is this is the most typical chinese novel you'll ever find.
First few chapters was good tho but then it went downhill.
Some old man gives him fantasy book,book gives him test,he passes and the book heals his upper body and lower body stays cripple,wakes up and thinks dad took care of him but left him to die, Pretty rich woman being overly kind and naive,typical cliche of everyone looking down on him(the phone buying scene), cute lil girl calling him daddy and make mama angry,and of course cliche gang sht.
Just don't read it if you don’t like slow placed and Over used storylines.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
this is a very good story.. ..
good plot development ...... just the appropriate amount of everything ... .action, drama, ***, ect...
i hope we get to see emotional development of character in upcoming chapters and this will be a perfect novel. ..
EAGERLY WAITING FOR FURTHER UPDATES
I claim first to rate the novel, just the fact that its a faction development type system
made me hooked, we need more novels like this, i the eternal celestial immortal approve of this novel!![img=update][img=fp][img=coins][img=exp][img=recommend][img=faceslap]