Let's start with the writing quality. It definitely has room for improvement but it's understandable. As for the story development, I'm not sure yet. The character design, however, is great. Overall, it's a good read! I recommend this novel
pretty good stuff keep up the good work
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way better than world wide simulation era ?????????????????????????????????????????????????
If your tired off all the same plot, and dumb mc that is only alive, cuz of plot armor and power up out the a** this is the story. This deserves to be a book from the original origins of the story and because it will literally blow u mind. Just love mc dosent make dumb mistake dosent hide got strength thru killing himself training day and night not sum system.
5 Star
Just because the cover
5 Star
Just because the cover
5 Star
Just because the cover
5 Star
Just because the cover
5 Star
Just because the cover
Your details are impeccable and your story line is great. You have a true talent for writing ; I look forward to reading more of your novels. I have thoroughly enjoyed your book. ❤️❤️❤️
it could have been good, but its just the usual moronic enemies/everyone else. why do they always refuse to see that the MC changed and go "hurr durr trash go die!" lol (repeat ad infinitum)
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Can the author please update? It been so long. I really want to know what going on in the war. And who is the person the MC likes. Is it his childhood friend the one with the dragon.
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