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I was actually surprised when I learned that this is the author’s first book. It’s a commendable job for a first time writer. Anyone can read it. Even those whose mother tongue isn’t English and are looking to improve their English like me. I really loved the part of the forest of the endless trees and hope the writer has planned to continue it later. The detail in the writing keeps me captured and the read is quite enjoyable.
good story, for specific tastes, but that of the multiple personality is a big no, my brain does not want to process that they are the same people, it is a constant anguish, it is like having multiple protagonists, and a lot of names to memorize, it is like that naruto does the clone jutsu, and each one has its appearance, name and personality.
The story is at its beginning but I do think it can become a great story. Perhaps I'm biased because the MC is a mage and a love mages, but still, keep up with the work.
I really don't know what to say. This is a nice read for anyone who enjoys beast wars and incredible fights with blood baths. It even has pictures attached to it, so it helps you picture the story more.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
The story is good but the grammar is unbearable. It's dissapointing. You could've done a better job. It's like reading a lousy wuxia story with a realistic genre.
Hello, I really like this story, its so cool !!! I like it. Keep on writing, this story will be a really great. You did a great job author !!!
Honestly the only complaint I have is Haruko and her Harem of girls to me its still NTR even if its girls, but other then that this is an amazing novel.
Cover: 5/5 Let's just say I have never seen such an amazing cover before. The realistic artwork and the blue soul next to the main character almost brings life to the character itself. The cover was well drawn out and fits the title completely.
Synopsis: 4.5/5 I can tell much work had been through with the short yet informative synopsis that gives a glimpse to us reader about the novel itself. Author has successfully hand out a good amount of information for us to know what we are going to expect.
Grammar: 4.7/5 So far, there aren't any noticeable grammar mistake that can be spotted at first glance. We can very much understand what the author is trying to portray, so not much complaint here.
Update: 5/5 As far as I can tell from this review I'm writing at the moment [1/3/2022], update releases are fantastic.
Storyline: 4.8/5 Although some plotline are generic or even cliche at times, I think this story is unique in itself with the "soul" part. And everyone has different opinion regarding their likes and dislikes. Thus, I can say this is a novel that I particularly enjoy and it's my opinion, not yours,
Overall: 4.8/5 I will say this again, HideousGrain has proven himself to be a capable author of storytelling again. If you're a fan of this work, then you should probably check out his other novel as well, namely, "God's Eye" and "Primordial Dimensions".
And of course, a shameless input here to end the long review and your reward for reading. Check out "Harness Cultivator". Thank you and goodbye!
I like the novel good grammar, smooth developments, character is an absolute psycho but I'm dropping it because I think it's just too realistic in a sense but, overall good work to the author.
the mc is basically a idiot with all whole bunch of advanced knowledge its like giving a dumb person the most advance computer in the whole universe and they only use it to what adult movies because of the graphics as for the people of that world it's like the author is trying to make them dumb so that he can make the mc look more smarter that he actually is like at the start is was okay but there is absolutely no progress in his personality he is just like a clueless baby whose only program to not use his brain when everything is laid out right in front of him and to help and be use by every character he comes across just for the sake of moving the story forward