Translation is like its generated by machinenovelAnd story is just dumbHe is literally playing a gameHe is another world but his previous world knowledge is the best......WTFAnd that scene when he was in the cave with the girl ..it was like she was waiting for him to sleep with her... like he just touched her once and she pulled her clothes open for him to do her....WTFthis novel is just waste of time!!
Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing.Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve. The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them.I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
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This story really has a uniqueness compared to any other stories out there.i strongly recommend it everyone.the character development is quite good and the most I like is the introduction to the story.the backstory that is added is quite intruging.anyone who likes the fantasy general definitely gonna like it.
This is a pretty interesting webnovel. It's about a character who loses his memory, but gains the powers of a vampire god through a system. The world has magic and swords.
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it and I want to know if you’re sop writing this book if so please don’t because this book is to good to be not ???finished.????????????????????????
Really good story keep it up....................................................................................................................I hate that there is no more exp from writing reviews
Mmmm alguien me podría decir cual es la tasa de publicación ? O al menos cuando será el próximo capitulo ? Saludos y por favor sigue publicando esta serie
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This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.
Feels like beginner writers first story. Well I do hope the author develops his writing and gets better. A lot of the game backround feels similar to some popular mmorg books. If you really like game books you may try to read it thow.Just some points why I droped it:Real world itself makes no sense.Mc feels like robot (just motions no feeling).The bad guys are morons as in arrogant characters with no brains.The game has been there 100 years and no one has discovered that you should act nice with npc to get quests?