Giving it the average grade as it is the kind of story that is mostly accepted within the standards of Webnovel's community. Hmmm... How should I give a comparison to this without spoiling... A Shadow Hacks-esque novel with some JP tropes that are badly done? Yeah, sound about right.
wait why there are 7 power stones they used to be more than 200 ?
Good writing quality with some grammatical mistakesStability of updating is kinda slow 12 chapter a weekStory development is really good I like the pacing of the storyCharacters are mostly well thought out and not one dimensional.World bacround is amazing and makes you see it clearly in your headA hidden gem worth your time.Start to really make sense around chapter 11.This is a story for those that like intelligent mc with strategic military thinking which usually pays of with a glorious slaughter.While not perfect it's still much better than most novels you will read.
Can’t believe I haven’t written a review but anyway every single chapter was a hit. Seriously there were no misses. My boxes r checkedLemon plot/Hardness ???I Plot Good written/design Character
He visto muchas obras de autores novatos que usan la matanza como entretenimiento, pero no abordan bien esto. No generan emociones, no hay lastima, no hay simpatía, es una obra sin emocion. Un mero cadáver funcionando por el mero hecho del autor. Hasta aquí llegó yo, la premisa es buena, pero el autor carece de las habilidades para construir un mundo, un carácter, trasfondo y aprovechar cada personaje que aparece en la historia. Incluso, le da el carácter a Dark de "sin emociones" de tal manera que no conoce el concepto de alguien que no tiene emociones. Él mismo no debería tener algún interés en el mundo o en él mismo, así lo planteaste, pero en busca de entretener, desechaste tu propio carácter. Mi sincera opinión, hay que reescribí la obra de manera dónde puedas crean un buen mundo, los personajes muestren las clara madurez para verlos como criaturas vivas y así, nosotros como lectores generemos apegos. Usas la muerte de manera tan diferente que no aprovechas lo que puedes conseguir con el propio valor de esa indiferencia. La muerte están fácil, pero la vida no debe ser trata de tal manera, crea vida, personalidad, emociones, complejo y destruye al lector con la facilidad de la muerte, eso es lo que deberías hacer si quieres abordar este tipo de temática. Pero como la mayoría de autores novatos en esta cosmovisión equivoca de indiferencia y sin emociones, generan un basurero de contenido absurdo e infantil. Tratan su propia escritura como un chiste.
This an amazing work but the updates are slow so I will give it a 4 star.............___-_+_+++++++++++_______++++++++_______+++++++++++____--------_+++____________++++++++++________-----------------
It's a good chapter keep up the good work I can't wait until the next chapter
I found this by luck..why the **** do all the authors that write the good FF's hide this ****......... honestly I found this by luck....put it in FF.........also whats up with the new chp?..it confusing..................................in case anyone misunderstands the one star is cause the author didnt put it in FF...
I like the plot of the story. It depicts the life of modern young professionals. Let's see the development of the story on the next chapters. ?
I love it! :) Waiting for the day this author is cameoed XD....I need a lot of characters for this review to be put up but I guess this should be enough right? Omg, this wasn't enough...this was though.
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It's a really good. It takes sc-fi and kingdom building and combines them in a clever way. There are not many like it in webnovel. So it's a must read