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It's a fun read if you are into the OP MC but the novel literally changes in chapter 70. It turns into a whole different story all together. It's not only for one chapter the new novel carries on from there without going back to the original story. WOULDN'T RECOMMEND UNLESS YOU WANT TO WASTE YOUR COINS.
After just 5 more chapters... it just get ridiculous more and more...The only good point of this novel is its descriptions. ..'...............................
Translation quality, world background are actually worthy of 4 stars but it will give an overall high review, so I couldn't do it. Not much to say. Till upto roughly 200 chaps, the novel just glorifies china so high that the author says that china has the best legacy than even the Egyptian, Roman, British, Persian, Ottoman Empires, which just proves that the author was dropped on his head when he was a baby. Then after 400 chapters or so, the MC becomes a bloodthirsty maniac that kills anything that obstructs him. Even if some helpless innocents are caught in the crossfire, he would not hesitate, not even a little bit the author describes it as "Zhou Fu's became colder and colder as the more he kills".It was at this point that makes me genuinely feel the urge puke and disgusted by the novel. He justifies killing as his own way of righteousness. Despite being a heavy lover of kingdom building novels, I can genuinely say that this is most detestable of them all.Some reviews above said that MC turns into ruthless rapist, to which I'm not surprised as the MC obtains a statue that can gather Phoenix qi by stealing other king's concubines and empresses, so he won't hesitate to do that.I know that many people are fed of naive, blob of justice MCs that evil MC are the trend nowadays, even I hate them, but this is going way too overboard. If there are alot of people who actually love this kind of character, I'm genuinely feeling worried for the future of humanity if such species of humans reproduces and spreads their plague-genes.
Is the MC stupid or what? My god, it seems far-fetched that he's dumb. 200 caps and he didn't understand anything about the game and the real world
I do not recommend this book. The premise of the story is a good one however other than the lead character none of the other characters are fully developed.
Give away your beautiful bride and gain a world level beauty, Give away your mother and you will gain a father,give away your job and you will get retirement. Give away your pipi and your mother will never again call you son.
Too many references ..But i Am in love with this novel and the way it’s progressing ......,............................,,, ...,..............
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The world-building is amazing and I hope the author continues to keep it that way, a very intriguing story. The writing is amazing and I highly recommend the story, Keep up the good work author!!
There are some suggestions tho, which I hope you take as a constructive criticism for your own improvement.You don't really need to be adamant in explaining the system but at least include some subtle hints or few information regarding it.The MC is great for developing so keep at it. I just hope you don't take his ruthlessness in later chapters. A cold dagger slices the hand that touches it. Don't go overboard in being conceited tho, a shadow may bask in the light but they stay firm relative in their position.The harem, i approve your building up too. Keep it not as rush, it relish the flavor. Character introduction should be firm and their encounter somewhat distinct than the others. In this your doing a good job. Nice building up Natalie, I like hardworking characters that although seen with shade of frost but within them a summer breeze.The world building could use some work. It is alright tho so I say slightly above average. Make people be absorbed in the explanation. Such as make some detailed overview to work the reader's imagination. The greatest working hand of the author is his reader's imagination so do experiment your own style in captivating that aspect. Of course you can't cater everyone so don't compromise the story for just about everyone.This is not because I don't like the story. It is good and interesting but I'll be frank that I'm not much sold. This is the highest I could give for now. I hope your growth would be outstanding.Current chapter: 128I'll be taking my leave then.
The author is named "The Plagiarist" because he plagiarizes other novels. Wizard of the Magus World is based on The Wizard World.Word is out that this novel is based on World of Cultivation ... which is excellent.Most think that WMW is better den TWW. If this is better than WoC, that would be sooo good!