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I like the idea. I dont think, or at least I haven't heard of one where they spent time with their parent grandparents.I'm hoping he goes to Ravenclaw because I dont think think, personally that he wont fit anywhere else.I personally would like him to be with Daphne as she isn't too Slytherin, she is pretty as well along with being one of the smartest witches.
This book helps me appreciate the transitions of storyline. The chapters shown me a new world of thrill and excitement. It's worth the read. Kodus to the author! ?
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1. Main character plotting revenge to his traitors 2. becoming a great cultivator3. reborn in a different bloodline4. The main character has a great personality5. The possible male lead may be as or more powerful6. The main character seems will be a powerful person, calm, smart*I enjoy reading this and wish to see more
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At least you put more twist in the story..later i guess after this arc..that will be cool if there is an assassin system..there will be other system like warrior system meaning there are other reincarnators in this world but still focus on the mc... that will be more diffuclt i guess......but continue the hardwork...
dropped . calculating raw chapter and stability of updates.raw chapters 900+translated 283 stability of updates 1 chapter every 1-2 weeks . ,, when i first read this novel the raw had over 400 chapters and the translated is 180+ now after 6 months . calculating.... lets say 1 week has 1 chapter , 1 week has 7 days , calculating .... 4 chapters per month , there are 12 months in 1 year you can get 48 chapters per year .calculating .....................it will take 20 years before the novel get to 900 chapters . can you wait for that?
After reading the first volume of this novel we can very easily come to the conclusion that this at best a filler novel.Translation Quality - good enough, nothing superb - 4 stars.Stability of Updates - 14 chapters of about 7-8 ss a week - 4 stars.Story Development - Most of the chapters are just filler. For eg. in one chapter, its only about the MC riding on his monster to examination venue through a forest, the authority keeping an eye on these examinees and one very trivial/short comedy segment. Are 7 ss worth this? Next, the monster trainer/master does very little in a fight (doesn't have the ability to fight nor does he actively command his monsters) - 2 stars.Character Design - Very little characters other than the MC have an important role, and even those that can be considered important side characters are developed enough. MC himself is a brat, mediocre at best. He is not funny enough, nor smart nor serious. I feel the characters are seriously lacking or rather the author has been really lazy in writing them. - 2 stars.World Backgroud - Nothing new, very similar to Monster Paradise and other tropes. - 3 stars.All in all, very disappointing read for its current rating of 4.4. Excluding Translation quality and Stability of Updates (which is a solid 4 stars), this novel is utter trash. Only 2.3 stars.Monster Paradise is just so much better than this in so many places and levels, and that is after the fact that Monster Paradise isn't that great itself.