the title is misleading since he didn't own the cultivation world but discover it instead but it's still a good read the story pacing is a bit slow but okay to me
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I'm giving my novel 5 stars because I know the future of this story.
Those who are hasty judges should ignore my novel because the real story will start from 30th chapter.
MC is an innocent lad who will evolve into a ruthless villain, the first 30 chapters are about background story, reasons and training.
This novel contains seggs/smut, cunning strategies and atrocities. it will be a unique novel, I will work hard on it.
Join the journey with MC and see how The Atrocious Werewolf Prince terrorize the worlds.
I am open to ideas and constructive criticsm as well, feel free to contact me on discord. link is given in synopsis.
Good novel starting was bit off some cliche suffs
But after some chapters story become dark and become more interesting
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Read to chapter 5 and it's great! I like the mc, and wants to know more about the backstory of the world. Thanks for the work and continue releasing more
To be completely honest the Grammer and writing style is not very good. His sentences are very simplistic and he constantly switches between first person (I) and third person (He). This kind of sentence structure leads to a disjointed and jarring reading experience, making it hard to become immersed in the story he's trying to convey.
That being said, at least the author seems to understand this as he tell us that English is not his native language in his synopsis. However, telling this to us up front doesn't make his novel any easier to read.
Outside of the writing itself the main character is not very endearing and he constantly does stupid stuff that will make you angry. I can understand to an extent but he makes several large and avoidable mistakes that leaves me wondering if he even has a brain.
In every other aspect hes kinda average without anything making him deep or complex. The same could be said about the plot and setting. It's not great but sometimes stuff happens out of freaking no where, leaving you frustrated. I do enjoy the gaming/leveling aspect of it though. I really like novels with these elements so it appeals to me more so than it might to others.
Read this novel only if you can put up with the disjointed writing style, the dumba** mc, and if you don't have anything else to read.
It would be a 3, or possiblly even 3.5 out of 5 stars had his English been better or the mc not being so stupid.
I really like reading novels with reincarnations and magic but its hard to find good ones. This one though is something Ill continue to read. It has so much potential and I'm excited to read more!
Shameless Author here, I'm rating my book 5.0. Thanks for reading! This was originally for an English project but I turned this book into my webnovel story. I hope this can be the start of my serializing journey.
FInaly i loved the first novel
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The story looks good, I hope the author can continue and not let the story get into the same repetitive genre of MMORPG that already exist.
Keep up the work.
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I've waited for quite awhile to get the complete understanding that at least i need to judge the quality of the story here and for sure I'm fascinated.
The author is obviously with passion, it's like he's trying to get you completely immersed in the world he has created which is large and full of a great potential for anyone reading this now and still deciding on whether to read the novel or not.
The character design is literally built from the beginning and by the time we will see how much the protagonists are going to change ( for me I'm excited to know more about Irene and how she will change while being with jaxith)
The fights are different and great, the fight sequences precisely are arranged in a scaling manner making it better over the time, not the regular one sided fights that the protagonist win at the end by a quick trick or discovering a hidden ability (became so cliché by the way), in here the author focused on fusing the knowledge of jaxith with his surroundings and ability to create a balanced fights that's at the end he just knows what's the right thing to do (the onohly was a perfect example on that but I won't spoil a word