My review after six chapters: Good author tone. The book has kept me captivated already. I already like Eric and waiting to see how the plot develops. Will write another review after reading 20 more chapters [img=update][img=update]
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I like this book.
but don't know if it will be picked.
probably not,......
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Its almost a perfect story so far please keep up the good work
this is a like hidden gem which not many people know about like the story is great the grammer is good and the updates are stable and even the worldbuilding is a breath of fresh air compared to run of the mill system novels
Writing in first person is a really bold move and congrats to you for actually doing it. The characters especially Stella are well developed. Just work on the grammar a bit and the book will be awesome
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I have read a massive amount of novels on this app and other places and to be honest the writing quality and development of both the story and MC is incredible. Truly an amazing novel that I would recommend to any one if my friends or others.
let me say this one last time i am sorry for everything i said everything i did and now that you have 10 reviews i hope you continue for the people that have and will enjoy this story in the future
Read all available chapters and so far the novel is good, not amaizing but still good. I have few problems with the novel:1. World Background (so far): 1.1 This is my personal opinion but there are only 2 nations (factions as author calls them). One is on our continent the other on the enemy continent and that's it. For me that's close to nothing. There is Bronzewood ( or something like that) where MC comes from, there is village/town/city i forgot the name of because it was included in like 2 chapters, and then there is Godhaven (capital). Not only is the whole continent a single country, but is seems that even that country is small. MC reached the capital in like 2 hours or so from his godforsaken farm.2. Story Development (so far): 2.1 This is my personal opinion (again), for me the development is too slow. Maybe that's authors' idea and it might pick up speed in later chapters, but still for 36 chapters he found out very little and basic information about the world he is in and travevled to Godhaven (capital city). His first mission was to capture demon in 48 hours and there are still more than 20 hours left, meaning 36 chapters descirbe only 20-30 hours. 2.2 The other think for me is that battles are too basic, there is only 1 skill that demon can use (I know thats only for now but still...) and demons from same species alway have the same abilities. You (author) could have put Mutation where the demon/pet mutates and gains diffrent skills, there are other ideas but you get the point - more uniqueness.3. Character Design (so far): 3.1 This is my personal opinion (AGAIN), the character is too rash on making decisions, especially about rescuing the princess. Did he fall for her already? I know he says something about not being a 'Coward', but in my opinon that's whole diffrent level of 'Bravery' bordering 'Stupidity' and 'Simping' . That's just the begining so he may evolve, but that;s what i saw up until now. That's pretty much it all my ranting. Its still good, but yea.. P.S. Good luck with the novel author.
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