I am really enjoying this new book! The MC doesn't have some ridiculous nonsense cheat, that instantly gives him everything he needs or provides plot armour. Rather he has only one advantage (immortality) and has to work hard and take things patiently in order to rise to the top.
Story building is good, and the pace is perfect. Not much is currently known about the world, but in a good/mysterious way.
However my only issue with this novel is the grammar quality, the names are often spelt differently in the same chapter. It's annoying, and there are some other small grammatical mistakes. A simple proofread would fix this issue!
Overall, excellent book and I hope it gets picked!
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okay I was looking for this book everywhere... like after watching the series you can't just ignore it...
God I am in love with this series but mostly VegasPete and it was hard to f8nd their storyline in here.
thanks
Finally, I finished it. Ok, so here's my review. I come here to read this novel because I like This author's other novel, "I will kill the Author" a lot and I heard that this novel's Protagonist is the main villain of that novel. But you know it's totally worth my time. He ll, Only last chap is enough to make it worth it. It will definitely be in my top 10 novel list.
In the first 20 chap, MC is simple, and in Starting chapters Author uses the lol word in conservation a lot but after that, he gets better and the Author stops using lol. After the first few chaps the story, writing, and grammar will get better and better. Although the last few chaps namely 120 to 135 are a bit boring and confusing. But the Author improves a lot as the story goes on and stops giving those cringe names... At least He tried. Definitely one of the top authors on this App. You can tell how much I like it from I complete this in 2 days... 2 nights to be more accurate.
But I have a Que here to Author.
[Spoiler]
Why didn't StarSuper destroy That Dragon fossil?? They have two things to protect, Fossil and a life branch. He can't destroy the latter for obvious reasons but if he destroyed the fossils he could focus solely on defending that live branch and stop Sam from another power-up and might be able to defeat him. Don't tell me he couldn't become for god's sake he can destroy a moon and there are some abilities that can literally reduce those fossils to atoms.
Wow, I usually don't like writing reviews but I couldn't stop myself from writing this. Good job.
I was excited at first when I read the fact that this novel would be realistic and not fantasy/reincarnation type of novel. However, reading the novel was very bland tbh. Usually it is the character that makes the story boring for me but this time the pace, story building and the structure language of the novel was disappointing to say the least. There isn't much description, there is a lot of conversations but it doesn't fit with the surroundings. The character building was unsuccessful. Even if the protagonist was a loser, at least the author was making enough effort to make the readers have that impression. In this case the character is just there. He just exists. I have nothing else to add.
Protagonista con sentido común(más raro que un huevo de dragón abisal divino con rastros de un divino emperador... Lol) me encanta como la historia no gira en torno al protagonista, cuando empecé a leer esta novela recuerdo cuando Duncan era un mortal y estaba cerca de un tesoro espiritual y los comentarios decían 'cómo obtendrá el tesoro' y en vez de alguna trama forzada para que lo consiga, todo fue usado para que se uniera a una secta
Well it is a interesting one. MC seems to use his brain properly and character development is quite good.
Needs to improve grammar and some misspellings.
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This novel is just amazing! I thought it was originally going to be a overlord knockoff but it has surprised me in all the right places.
The story is decent. There is some poor writing choices in the beginning that will confuse readers for a little bit but will start to make sense later. Reading ahead through MTL I'd say the story is one worth taking the time to read. The author seems to be a little prone to not filling in all the details but does give enough to figure things out. This just means one will have to think some when reading. Over all not bad.
I believe the author should also add fanfic to the tags, as I’m reading this I can’t help but keep thinking how much it reminds me of the anime: Major. Overall the story is decent some misplaced words every now and then but other than that keep up your fanfic with a system.
As the author I am here to give my honest review. This is definitely one of the best villain novel out there. Here you will see our mc( villain) defeat almost all kinds of protagonists whether cliche or rare. You will be hooked once you read it.
*There are no brain dead plots.
*No Ntr.
*No unnecessary face slapping.
*No nationalism.
*No licking the heroine.
*Iq online mc.
* Harem