The rest of the chapters are available for reading on wuxia world or amazon. The mc’s character after the first arc didn’t grow at all and the only enjoyable part for me was the antagonists and schemers until the last 3 volumes where the story improved a lot, especially during the war with the gods.
Other than that although the epilogue gave a happy closure to most of the characters at the sacrifice of the protag and left room for another adventure I would've been satisfied if the story gave him a conclusion.
I dont know it too early to put some review since it was the only the beginning of the story and since there were still no exciting topic regarding the title its just too early tp give some review if its good or bad story
I quite like the plot, and the idea behind it.
The only drawn is the writing quality, if you could change that I don't mind giving a higher rating...
It is good original novel and mc is face smacking and op type with comedy and game elements tag it is another good virtual reality novel thanks for your work!!!!P.S how many chapters will u release in a week .??
Is MC female or male
Just asking for a friend
Before anyone ask No it dose not matter i Just like novels with female MC better
Webnovel i still hate the fact that you have to write 140 words before you can finish a review
Word count: 250
Finally the ending! I found myself waiting time and again for the chapters every day! the test of unity is such a powerful concept and I liked that is what you played with. A look into the world, of society, of it’s own misgivings.. The world could be so much better with unity yet not everyone is willing to make that final push against the tests that are waiting against them..
This is a copy of my other review but since it’s the same story it should be fine.
Good.
Nice fanfiction bro. great story and great work. I beleive you will complete this fanfiction and won't drop it midway....... best of luck man ?????
Best story. Slow Start. Fun Read. Completely Hooked. Enjoyable. Fascinating Look into Culture of the Ancients.
I love the storyline and the mc is a sword is kinda unique. instead of his owner being reincarnated and his story being narrated, his sword is the mc of the novel. the mc is kinda powerful but I believe that more cultivators are much more powerful than him.
First off why is there so many 5 star reviews for this? It absolutely does not deserve the stars. It gives no actual feedback to the author by saying it's all good when it's apparent that there are problems in the story.
I don't know what to say it's all poorly edited if even at that, there is not a single thing about this novel that could have been worse. Reading it is difficult due to constant spelling mistakes, wierd pacing and having half of the chapter just be stats that have zero meaning.
I tried to at least give it a fair shot by reading through 30 something chapters thinking maybe it gets better it doesn't.
Author if you're reading this can you try using a spell checking extension on your browser, it would make it so much more readable. I hope you don't get discouraged and try to improve.
heyo crazy cronie here,
review on 27/04/2021 @chap289 (released chap till date: 295)
review divided in:
Short review
Long review with ratings
IMO
Conclusion
Warning (includes spoilers)
SHORT REVIEW:
Pure gold! One of the best modern harem out there! And also my review is based on the previous novel, though i dont think anything really changed.
LONG REVIEW:
writing: 8.5/10
Few grammatical errors were there. Many might also not like the first person perspective (though this novel really did great, and i dont think third person perspective will suit this novel)
update: 10/10
This is newly updated, and the author promised 7/week. For me 7 per week is good for original novels.
plot: 8.5/10
Sometimes plots are repetitive, but then again this is day to day life of a seemingly 'normal' high school student. So yeah repetitions are allowed!
Harem? One of the best harem story i read. Yeah sometimes it feels too rushed (especially few girls in the later chap which i din like) but yeah you can't deny the satisfaction you feel sometimes when mc and the girl get together after 100s of chapters.
World building... There really is nothing.. the world, till now just revolves around few places.
characters: 9/10
With such a big harem, i will just say author did great job in giving most of them 'real personalities'.
Most of them have their own thoughts and ambitions. Even the male side charas has different personality, i really loved this thing about the novel.
pacing: 8.5/10
Slow! Let me repeat once again... This is a story of a highschool boy's daily life.
Yeah so authors takes the chance to explain the whole day. Sometimesnit even takes 30 or so chapters for a day, but i personally dont mind it.
dialogues: 8/10
At the beginning it was a little pale. Every character seemed to talk in similar manner but later chapters author really improved, and one can notice the changes.
entertainment: 10/10
This is a novel you can't get bored... This is a biased scoring
Overall: 4.5/5
IMO:
Maybe, sometimes getting a different character's view point will just be awesome (as long as it doesn't affect the plot.)
CONCLUSION:
An amazing harem novel! 30 chapters are enough to hook you!
I am not talking about harem haters, but even if you are just ok with harem then do give this novel a try!
WARNING:
*SPOILER (not exactly)*
- Sometimes little bit on the darker side.
- No females who have joined the mc have any visible problems with him (tho they tend to get jealous many times.)