I really like the way you described the ML as well as the background. One can easily imagine and feel this in their mind. The idea of the story is also good so keep going. I recommend others also to read it. A worth reading novel.
MVS is one of my top book so I have had wanted to read this for quite some time and voila....Its finally in WN!!
And I love the start haha??quite diff from MVS's start?
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Extremely bad writing and translation quality, borderline unreadable. This wn.com after all. Nobody comes here with expectations of quality. But its bad even after that.
Very enjoyable, some minor delays in updating but good read. i vote for The book every other day and gIft every 45 chapters. Reasonable original content and enjoyable character interactions.
At first the story seems interesting but the more you read, you realize that the plot is just follows the same old sign-in type novels routine.
Author here:Sorry for any grammar mistake or spelling mistake that I missed . I have always wanted to write an original Gamer story and this is my first attempt at it..It's a good VR game novel with a Female MC. I have tried to make the world building real and logical Thank you for reading the story.
No background whatsoever which Just makes it difficult to understand and is too confusing to read. Its a Great idea but without any background it just drips random facts that we had know way of knowing they existed
so after reading 22 chapters today I decided to give this book a review for people wanting to start reading this book. The story development is pretty good so far and the time skips are crazy and perfectly written. character development I love the mc how he acts and stuff definitely worth reading I promise you won't regret it!
So far thIs book is very good i hope the author continues to write more chapters for this story cant wait ❤️❤️❤️❤️??❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????
Petition to bring back "I Can See the Lines of Fortune"! A wonderful story to try, especially now that pocket hunting dimension is over. An all around interesting read! Please resume the translation of it! (Trying this as it worked for World of Deities)
despite my 3.6 score, I really quite enjoy this novel. What I have a problem with is the illogical nature of the new world he's in.Martial artists / rich people act just as unbridled as they would in a medieval setting despite being in a modern setting, quite openly either threatening or killing/kidnapping people. A martial artist with the tiniest of strength is feared as if calling the police wouldn't work perfectly fine.