Murder School

This is pretty interesting. I would love another update to this. It's very cool and I would love if you went into more details. It's a very interesting story none the less. I still think it's cool. I would rate it three stars since it only has 5 parts.

this is not really a review but its something that will improve ur writing if u want to use it but add a little more background information to make the sence more interesting and fun to read that goes for the characters to the girl she does not have a good disruption of her to much u cant clearly see her too much it's very faint but all in all it's a very good story to begin with I do suggest to add on to the story on the next chapters ^¥^ :)

I dont know it too early to put some review since it was the only the beginning of the story and since there were still no exciting topic regarding the title its just too early tp give some review if its good or bad story

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