Honestly you can kinda take this review with a grain of salt because there are so few chapters I cant say anything about stability of updates or world background really, but honestly i'm hooked. The writing quality is really good and so far the characters, irl world, game, and npcs and everything are rly good and well written. The author has also dropped foreshadowing and honestly my imagination is running wild and I can't wait to read more. With only 9 chapters I can't guarantee the novel is good but so far its promising and its 100% worth it to at least try reading it.
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Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
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Alright story, basically skipped all the chapters... I have found the story very dull. There's nothing rly to it.
I mean the hero he travels with is already in the level 70s.... like wtf? We see no progression from the mc. It's like he is a little voice just floating along with the hero...
I was waiting practically the whole story so far for the mc to go back to his "owner" the girl. I mean she is a newbie adventurer and is like level 10 or something.
There would have been much progression from the mc and his companion then. We would see them grow together with the mc learning more about the world in the travels. He would acc gain levels etc.
For me, the first couple of chapters were really weird with the father throwing away the ring to the random-ass happenings after. Then for me the story just becomes nothing. No progression for the mc no growth or anything just an extremely dull story with nothing happening. (for the mc)
If the story was about the hero then it would be a bit more interesting but this isn't why I wanted to read the story. I came for the ring mc...
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Hello author here, I would like to tell you guys that this novel won't be updated constantly because of my current situation(modules) so I hope you can wait or just drop this one. Also just some heads up that there'll be plenty of deaths around the mc so don't get too attached to them
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It's better than the average trial read novel by a lot. The world is interesting, the writing quality is good. Feels so weird to have a good novel in trial read. This category has been plagued by brain-dead stories and tropes and the first 20 chapters of this one looks good. I hope this keeps going and this review doesn't end up looking trollish.
I would love to give this story a million stars. It was more than what I expected. I'm seriously waiting to see what's gonna happen next. The writing quality is perfect and the charater design is great too.