This one is seriously good. The story is slow paced and character are well written. The world building is good and better than most of the stories out there. I wish there will be more and quick updates.
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The grammar has drastically improved from before, but it definitely needs more refining. I'd suggest getting an editor to further refine the novel and increase immersion. Additionally, for personal improvement, try using grammar editing apps such as Grammarly. Buying Grammarly premium will definitely further refine your writing and maybe teach you some more grammar.
That aside, the novel is highly interesting and engaging. I'd suggest having the MC improve his battle power, but that's about it.
I've only ready a few chapters of the book and I must say the book is interesting and I've loved it you've got extraordinary writing skill are amazing keep it up and bring more chapters
Shameless Author’s 5 -stars review. This book is going to be a bit different from what I usually write, but I hope you guys will enjoy it nonetheless.
finally a novel where the mc is not a male,i cant find any of these anywhere
Why not? Why not i as the author shamelessly leave 5 star review on my novel.
A minute of your time if you please. The reviews talking about the stupidity of the main character and plot armor in the earlier chapters is true. The reason I am not re-writing them is because i don't want to change things and then the later chapters are filled with plotholes. I am not asking for you to drag yourself through those chapters, if you can't take that stuff, then my advice to you is not to waste your time. Seeing as this is my first novel, I would like to think that my writing will get better over its course. This review is just to ward off less tolerant people, instead of them reading the novel and leaving a permanent negative review about something that I am working/have already worked on in the later chapters. I welcome criticism if it will help me improve my writing skills, but having the rating of my novel lowered because of a situation that is being solved/already been solved is just depressing. If you read to this point, thank you for your time. Hopefully, this review will not cause any misunderstandings
This review is up to Chapter 103.
For any ******** fan of this novel, please just ignore/skip this review as it wouldn't suit your taste.
The story was quite promising at the beginning that he got into the world. I did enjoy it. But things turned bad as new characters were gradually introduced.
Firstly, the content was full of filler made by side characters with primal IQ that you would constantly wonder if they were homo sapients. The main character decision making was also repetitively bizarre and unrealistic. In many occasions, it would only make sense to me if these grown up men and women were substituted with middle school boys and girls. Their conflicts have similar level of significant and intelligence.
It is not that I expected a perfectly rational characters. I do find making mistakes interesting and realistic. But repeating the stupidity is exclusive for idiots. The mc is becoming harder and harder for me to bear with. So I have decided to drop this.
I really wanted to like this novel, I love clan or sect development novels. But like most people have said already, it just a collection of cliches from different Chinese novels. The novel is random and all over the place. The main character is supposed to be smart but makes random stupid decisions for unexplainable reasons. Instead of focusing on building his power while he is weak (like an actual smart person would do), he stupidly runs around being arrogant, feeling like he is above everyone else when in fact his cultivation is extremely low and he is not as smart as he thinks (To the point that he is even ignorant about his own body and cultivation). The power levels when it comes to the main character are all over the place. From what I have read so far, the mc's power level is basically whatever the author says it is at any given time.No cultivation? no problem, with his weapon he just randomly created and his (deus ex machina) intent he can basically kill anyone he wants. The power levels are basically a joke, even if the strongest person on the continent shows up, the author just needs to come up with some random (super Saiyan) reason for the mc with the lowest cultivation rank to be able to kill him easily. I mean, the mc basically boasts about how all-knowing he is, to the point of being able to raise anyone's cultivation at will. Wouldnt it be better for him to just raise his own cultivation to at least a decent level first? that would have the entire thing a lot more believable. Overall, I am really disappointed with this novel as it could have been way better. I decided to drop it as I could tell that it would only be a waste of time as this novel is going nowhere fast.