this is my first novel, Pls you guys should support me, comment and tell me where I am meant to improve in my writting, criticism is welcomed. I will try to improve more on my updating stability Pls bare with me, as for those who gave the Nobel power stones I'm grateful Pls continue supporting me .
Hi, This is my new novel besides
"Having Confidence in Another World" (shameless advertising)
I edited and fixed some errors for more comfortable reading experience.. I hope you guys like this novel.. Always leave a comment on each chapters or give a review for me to get motivation to write more..(ง'̀-'́)ง
I just can't get enough of this novel, I would definitely recommend it to anyone ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
nice job author
Ignore the tags, only the system one is real, there is no harem, yaoi, weak mc, ntr, or (at least to my knowledge) any plagiarism.
This is a world designed solely by the author, and all the characters (well, those that matter) are likable; the grammar is rarely incorrect and the story is quite enjoyable.
Those tags are just fake and leave me wondering who wastes their time vandalising someone else's hard work
I'm on chapter 3, and boy is this story doing a number on me. I normally don't read stories involving systems, but this one caught my attention and interest. I like the character and how it started. The descriptions and the characters feel real. The world is very well constructed, you deserve five stars for that! And your stability of updates, you gotta teach me how to update like that man!
My only complaint is, the grammar and the punctuation. It's good but it can always be better. And be sure to capitalize the start of every line!
This is honestly so awful like I have no idea what happened he went from recharging the game after buying himself exclusively beta testing equipment to everyone having one and they are having a massive fight. But I’m confused if the world has already merged because in the same chapter it talked about two months till the world merges but the next chapter is a full blown battle in the game no context. Maybe they missed uploading a chapter or something but I honestly don’t understand and do not recommend it. Just as a reference I’m a native English speaker and even Beowulf makes more sense than this.
Great read so far
Keep it up author and release more chapters
For those who like hero stories, this is the story for you. I have read this on Webnovel as well, and like it there, and here.I really like it. It's goofy and fun and I can't wait to see more. Still super early on so my review will probably change as it goes on and gets bigger. For now I like it though. I want more fire force powers so hope we get more from Hope.A very well developed world, several mysteries that are revealed over time, points of view from various characters.There is so much information that I could spend hours writing the review, I recommend giving it a chance, it's really worth the experience. A good story I think.
Hi ,
This is Shirley, I am an editor an editor of a digital writing platform- D R EA M E.
After reading your book, I decided to contact you and if possible, to extend you an invitation on distributing your works. However, there are so little I can talk about it here. If you were interested, please contact me via [email protected]
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Sincerely
Shirley
REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
I am deeply happy that the author created this novel. Great world-building and narration surpassing mine. Splendid writing quality and fluency of narration.
ADVICE
None, the author was a better author and his work was something I have to learn to. Kudos!
Really cool world and a very interesting idea for science fiction! The quality of writing is higher than usual considering this is Webnovel, always a nice thing to see! Good story overall
This webnovel is very nice . It starts off quite slow and a little confusing especially with the double names of the protagonist. But later on in the novel it starts to get interesting and substance is slowly added to the novel. If your looking for a book that is fast paced straight from the start than this novel isn't for you but if your looking for a novel that you can fall in love with slowly or at a normal pace this is perfect for you. The author is very nice and considerate and seems very dedicated and the story goes at a pace that can't be called slow but can't be called fast either.