Seeing the flag on the cover, I recognized it was one with several aspiring authors with less than desirable English.Fortunately, I don't assume too much, so I read anyway. I was pleasantly surprised. It's a good story overall, and I look forward to more Minor English errors in places, but I think I read less than ten in the whole book that I recall. So that's pretty good.Oh, and I do adore support characters, so it's interesting to me. He's growing op and developing a harem, but no complaints. I enjoy these things when done well. It seems they are being done well to me.
Más o menos, está entretenida a pesar de ser muy repetida por eso le voy a dar tres estrellas y porque está cosa me puede s huevo 140 caracteres
From what I had read of the last version, this story will be very entertaining. The new writing style that Dawn has decided to use also fits better than the last one in my opinion. Overall, I'm looking forward to how this story will develop past the last version.
Ling Yun is good, but I hope this one better, and please maintain the balance and not rushing to add so many women like Xia Tian, or it will ruin the story.
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five star for just being a fresh thing not an average system novel or average reincarnation just hope it sustains the quality i think true readers of this app wouldn't vote it as it slightly out of their iq scopeno picking but i will read the mtl anyway i have long lost hope of any trail read that i like to be even picked
I for one am enjoying the story. Not really understanding why people are calling the mc a beta. He was just thrown into a cultivation world and you expect him to go on a slaughter spree. Character development is good thing.
a waste of time, even if you have nothing to read, you still shouldn't read this
It is currently the tenth chapter. The story has been good so far, but the start was a little confusing, atleast for me. I think that this will turn out to be a good novel in this genre. The fact that this is in my opinion a promising novel is simply because of the family dynamic, most novels don't have this kind of family thing going on for them, at most the mc will be dating someone and that is in my opinion really boring.in short: A really promising novel, that has a great family dynamic.And author pls update the novel!!!!!
Is this the same as before(prev. author) or is it different? I'm just curious, because I know that there are a lot of chapters in the other work.
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great novel so far.no system .mc has a library in his mind or we can say he has photographic memory .but alot of mages has higher level memory and computation as him.i don't know he will become op in future