KelvinSekwati
1 word... Trippyi rarely give a full 5 start review but this one deserves it. it's start with a bit mainstream then flipped your entire mind. How can you combined froopyland and hell in one world? it's crazy. it was like I'm using lsd and crack. i like the character and all but what get me hooked was the world. It was unreal and what is the word... ...colorful? i know, i know. they have a literal hellspawn but the world was amazing. Great experience if you want to feel something fresh.
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I will (most likely) update this review if my opinion changes — not too far in, but so far, promising story and am liking the world building. Plus, detecting some DnD-inspired elements, so gotta love that lol
I have really been enjoying this story. I like the progression of the character but I feel like there is a lack of exploration of his character in the last 5 chapters. Keep up the good work.
The minute he joined his mom and became her deciple the story went downhill and became cringe worthy honestly I don’t care for sentimental stories I thrive and enjoy chaos and pure unfiltered evil so this story is not for me I saw the antihero tag and got excited about this but the mc is soft and pitiful nevertheless this story has great Potential and others will enjoy it so don’t take my criticism seriously and keep writing ✍️
Something new and refreshing for reading must read story??????????????????????All the best to author ??????????????????????????
A new story has began. Let's see how it develops further. Did Sashi unfolded The mystery named Arjun?Or she will leave her fate to develop itself?
Cute Novel.Lovable Characters.Keep up the good work ^_^. This is too cute, I hope you won't drop it.Diabetes Overload :D// Can't wait for the new characters
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First the cover pic! Then synopsis! And then the story!Amazing plot!!nicely written!!!!!!keeping going author! don't drop it in between!!
You got all my stones for the day, Keep going!As a review for readers... I read a lot. This interests me. I think the story has a unique flow that reminds me of maybe only one other thing I've read, and even that only due to some similarity in tone. I'm enjoying the different pressures on the MC and his work to orient himself. I think the side characters could stand to be a bit deeper, as they've switched out quickly so far. That said there has been some reason to do so, and what we do see of them is relatively solid, though stereotypical at times. A bit of cringe when the woman is overtaken by her maternal instincts as her brother acts as a cold young master. The main worry I have for the novel as it progresses is how/if it will form a deeper plot beyond the current motivation of "growing to survive". However, that is a common issue and this story has a decent foundation to build something good. You can see the author playing with different narrative tricks at different points, which is fun in itself. Overall, it will be fun to watch both this author and the story grow. Its on my primary reading list, and I invited other readers to do the same.
Whose book is this? Looks amazing! You should definitely check it out! I bet you the author is super smart and handsome.*cough* anyways, I hope you will enjoy my novel. I'd like to believe that I am bringing something new to the table with Project Eden. I pieced together many genre tropes and created something that I hope is interesting and unique. Regardless, I am having a blast writing this story. I don't plan on dropping it any time soon, so please show your support with that sweet sweet powerstone! Also, I will make it my life's purpose to upload two chapters a day, but that doesn't mean there has to be no more than 14 chapters every week ;)
